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Corrupted Visions: How we hold it down
Everybody browses the open mic forum....
& they know CV got somethin for'um We only drop hot and stop clots ..... Flow off the hook like phones watch!..... We'll never be topped, clever and stocked..... Lyrical stories not flopped forever unlocked We have jaws fall, kings like Saul's called Bring in back to the bible days and all Life's purpose is unknown and that's reality And we all get stuck in the same formality Live our days at work so others can slack....... Well let's grab the money and strike back White black, every race gives a slight smack.... Knocked down and we right back, recite facts.... Nobody can fuck wit Corrupted we own the mic ..... Leave ya'll disrupted in battle cuz the Pen Pals Fight More diverse than diverse himself .... it's worth the help... Need an army to take us down like Godzilla a burst from hell Our words hot like the oven, bakin Mc's by the dozen Topical killers and shit battlers are like our cousins ... Shit...I'm even one myself constantly destroyin my foes... I lead my own crew like a pimp deployin his hoes.... But we dont get down like that .... we like a family.... And i'll put a bullet in anything you can hand me The super bowls tommorow and it's got me suped... Hope the panthers win cuase they beat the eagle swoop.... I hate philly and all they sports teams and i will forever.... I'm a redskins and penguins fan ...... it's quite the endevour... Everybody browses the open mic forum.... & they know CV got somethin for'um We only drop hot and stop clots ..... Flow off the hook like phones watch!..... We'll never be topped, clever and stocked..... Lyrical stories not flopped forever unlocked The 2nd verse is the worst my multis sink in first .... Then the punchlines hit and leave readers in a hearst I attack deadly ... my weapons are heavy & leady ... Ready, for any thug who thinks his raps are steady... I kill when asked ... I guess call me a bounty hunter .... Soak up achohol ...... stealin the paper towels thunder Then I wipe the floor with rappers like Mr. Clean ..... You can't flow ..... you cant even drift or lean .... Spit like machines for green and rip some spliens.... That's how I make you back out of battle real clean... Leave no mess you know Meks gotta cover his tracks.... Thas why I spit all over'um fuck'um witta rubber in fact..... Everybody browses the open mic forum.... & they know CV got somethin for'um We only drop hot and stop clots ..... Flow off the hook like phones watch!..... We'll never be topped, clever and stocked..... Lyrical stories not flopped forever unlocked |
Word :)...This was pretty good i thought...the flow in this was good, it stayed on through out the piece, liked it....had some good multies through out the whole piece, made the flow pretty good...the hook was alright i thought....vocab in this was good....overall a pretty good piece...keep at it.
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I'm impressed...you have elevated drastically in last few OM's...I use to think as just a battle emcee...but pieces like this gives me second thoughts...this was very nice...(although I'm far ahead on topicals~~~~~~^^
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Dope...liked tha flow most all
Tha way you worded it..just flow'd good Nice drunk keystyle...lol good job |
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lets get more this one aint that long |
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