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ImCorruptinPoetry wit the Soultress
keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind
elevate my skillz to where birds fly will gouge out anybodies Third eye belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie // my vain burdon drinkin plain burbon that i play mentals like brain surgon Joe's king of the hill bringin the kill addictted 2 dope not clingin 2 skill that and i be takin a smarter route usually i be blazin a quarter ounce no hero fight defy these sterotypes wit zero might they whores for christ really i do depsise skanks n whores live filthy, so Soul what u bathen for? structure for rules in vain I ignore the Norm it aint allowed me, no more so now I... keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind elevate my skillz to where birds fly will gouge out anybodies Third eye belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie // Justice will never be done, some say everyday ends the same in one way life's too complicated for any gun play complex like should I now run or stay King Koopa ran away like everyday Watch the cartoon* you 'tarded loon i speak like anyother crummy goon one of many from the dummy room but i alone... keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind elevate my skillz to where birds fly will gouge out anybodies Third eye belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie // this free flow is how my cold palms talk devestatin everything likE bomBS dropped against me? Who has sumptin 2 prove like Winner take all i gott nuttin 2 lose 2% like im nothing what this crazy Is fadin duh im more like what crazy does walkin around town with a crazy buzz like said my 2 cents is what crazy does spit Mentality when i spit my rottin rage ebs be decapitatin kats like Johnny Cage cant be denied !!! keep a dirty face 2 cover a filthy mind elevate my skillz to where birds fly will gouge out anybodies Third eye belive nuttin ya hear, cause words lie // _________________ Soul hooked the re-curring chours I posted the verses, appreciatte the read none the less :thumbup: *the Super Mario bros cartoon ya tarded loon |
What about Soultress? None of this looked like her writing..
Anyway, this was OK..didn't really seem like poetry, more of an open mic, some parts just didn't fit at all and on a whole it seemed like you wrote more for the multi's than you did the content..Wasn't really feeling it...Stay up |
i reflipped Souls part to make it flow better
appreciatte the fee still, stay up |
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