T West vs Harlem's Finest
 

10 lines.. 30 mins..
Blind spits..
Good luck..

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Biting names off of Big L, just so that he have a greater appeal
He's Harlems Finest...But isn't homer simpson from springfield
Your such an example, mothers of America must really love you
they can say to their kids...
This is what drugs can do to you!
sounds like he melts gun barrels, no wonder ur like a candle
Because you've lost this match...as quick as u thought of ur handle
Now I know why harlem is filled with poverty and violence
They must have nothing...if this punk is der finest
And ya name, oh man, it's just so gangsta too...
it's Welsh...
No wonder i've left ya verse dark n purple like grape juice


^Wackness at it's best :) Good luck

I peeped ya last battle with Proof son.. I'm ashamed I even read it
Wanted me to set the battle up.. still.. its not often herbs earn credit
Tried signing up to LLL.. basically you've gotta elevate to get that far
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Face facts.. This is the only way West could ever raise the bar..
Fool couldn't beat a drum, I'm surprised you even took the chance
Obviously can't take the strain... even his AIM handle is pissypants!
Derives from a family of achievers, the herb himself was exstatic
Mom's debut... double page spread........ National Geographic!
His whole profiles one big punchline.. I mean seriously.. why accept?
Kid purchased 'Rap for Dummies'.. seems he's still readin the second step

uppin for sum votes............................................. ....................................

T-West

Biting names off of Big L, just so that he have a greater appeal
He's Harlems Finest...But isn't homer simpson from springfield
..Ok..the concept has been done, not a good opener
Your such an example, mothers of America must really love you
they can say to their kids...
This is what drugs can do to you!
..Alright..personal..not bad..though a little played
sounds like he melts gun barrels, no wonder ur like a candle
Because you've lost this match...as quick as u thought of ur handle
For some reason i liked this.. nice
Now I know why harlem is filled with poverty and violence
They must have nothing...if this punk is der finest
He's still from Wales, regardless his handle..so it doesnt work..
And ya name, oh man, it's just so gangsta too...
it's Welsh...
No wonder i've left ya verse dark n purple like grape juice
Muah ok. not a real good closer either.

[B]Harlem's Finest
I peeped ya last battle with Proof son.. I'm ashamed I even read it
Wanted me to set the battle up.. still.. its not often herbs earn credit
Shows effort of research..ok lines..
Tried signing up to LLL.. basically you've gotta elevate to get that far
l l
l l
Face facts.. This is the only way West could ever raise the bar..
Slightly funny, somewhat creative
Fool couldn't beat a drum, I'm surprised you even took the chance
Obviously can't take the strain... even his AIM handle is pissypants!
Witty..& comical.. nice personal
Derives from a family of achievers, the herb himself was exstatic
Mom's debut... double page spread........ National Geographic!
Mom lines are a No-No.. but the twist in the second line was funny
His whole profiles one big punchline.. I mean seriously.. why accept?
Kid purchased 'Rap for Dummies'.. seems he's still readin the second step
Ha..got a giggle..ok closer

Overall: T-West wasnt bad..the structure & flow where on point..
Had some ok punches & attempts at personals..But i think that pic bar,
Didnt really work well, i mean i clicked it & he didnt look weird or like a druggie to me..
..So that kind of took away the essence..
& i pretty much agree with West's last line..
Harlem's Finest came better i feel..Had a ok closer & it only got better from there..
Creative..witty & overall funny punches..
Just better, & much more personal..Flow & structure where on point too.
So for a overall battle verse & especially punches..
vote Harlem's Finest

Uppin x2...

harlems fittests takes dis straight up.beta puches,flo and structure,good verse from u.T WEST..but jst fell short of da mark..keep it up both of u!!
V/harlems fittest
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

not bad either of you, i like t-west verse better though, and if you read the battle, did you vote on it, we need some votes so i can battle again, and hey t-west, could u hit up my battle with missing page

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Uppin x3... describe the votes if possible.. they'll be disallowed no doubt otherwise..

ok ill try my best to explain.
West- i've seen much better form you..I didnt really like this verse at all..punches were iffish flow was ok.. not a very good verse from you west..i thought you'd bring much more heat..you should i think you underestimated him..

H.F- this was a funny verse..punches were new..flow was koo..everything was dope..west shoulda came prepared to battle you..however he didnt..which i think really lost him the battle on this one..i liked the whole geographic concept..nice battle both

v/ H.F

hit this up please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110984

punches from T west were really hard hitting, and harlems finest was just not very good, in any subject, T west had flow, timing, personals, punches, and a few multies

v/twest

Uppin x4... drop a link etc...

Gotta go Harlem's Finest on this one. It seems T seriously underestimated Harlem after all of the good competition he's been battling lately and it came back to knock him out. West delivered a good verse if not up to par with some of his other cool material and had good structure and flow but Harlem came in well thought out and with serious wit to bring it to West. Both verses look the same on the surface but Harlem's has a layer of depth that takes this battle. Good joh both of you though, i enjoyed reading the battle.
Vote- Harlem
drop a vote here if you would
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111365

Uppin x5... final up...