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SweetNess 02-01-04 07:05 PM

SweetNess vs lil' Scrap
 
10 to 15 lines
house rules
no d/c/h votes
due by midnight
you spit first

lil' SCRAP 02-01-04 07:07 PM

we know each other so all this shit is true life bitch

lil' SCRAP 02-01-04 07:25 PM

what's up ya gay bitch, i've known ya most my life
you a bitch ass that tryed to kill ya self wit a fuckin' knife
you stupid mutherfucker, you talk da fuckin talk
but you a pussy ass bitch that runs when it comes to the walk
when it comes down to it you run and get the man
call the cops, and ya okay with them makin' ya stand
cocksucker ya bitch-ass ain't as hard as ya say ya are
but you a bitch and scrap is ya bodyguard
there's a fuckin' reason that you fuckin good wit a klit
instead of a dick ya bitchass has a fuckin pussy slit
fuck you bitch wit out scrap you can't survive da game
you butt hurt at me cause now i'm da one that get ya girl's fame
you can't insult me bitch because we have lead the same life
only differnence is, unlike you my bark can back up my bite

SweetNess 02-01-04 07:57 PM

hey you little bitch whats new thats my que to say fuck you
i dont need this battle to know i'm better that you
first thing i'll touch on is your little bitch named Ines
shes such a slut that she'll drop to her knees suck your penis
hell i bet you that she'll even let you put it in her anus
its too bad that she fucked you up and gave a case of obsession
fucking acting like a bitch saying hey baby i'll give you a back rub session
always talking shit like i'm done with this bitch shes out of my life
but face it bitch your not man enough to turn to the kinfe
your like a fucking welcome mat letting her walk all over you
and your such a bitch you know she's cheating on you
She says, " Sweetie i want you to get your tongue pierced"
so what did you do, you went out and did what she wished
See bitch even if i lose this battle i will always know that i'm better that you
So hey i hear your bitch callin you better get going and let her start walking on you.

Da_Killa_Kid 02-01-04 08:15 PM

Alright now I know both of these crazy fuckers and This is how im breakin this shit down.

both had pretty good structure, and the personals were fuckin hilarious. Vocab was minimal for Sweetness cause he used "you" like four times.lil scraps was better a little but words were too simplistic at points. Both had a nice flow strecthed in points but good all together. Now the punches weren't that great in the hits but lil scrap had the harder punches. All though scraphad the harder punches Sweetness had the better personals. On a scale of 1-10 ill give lil' scraps vers a 7 cause of the diversity in his punches, and I give Sweetness a 6 just because of the fact that he used the same words more than once. So my vote goes to lil Scrap

VOTE_lil' SCRAP

lil' SCRAP 02-02-04 04:07 PM

you guys need to up and vote. that way i can get done wit this bitch and battle the rest of you.

lil' SCRAP 02-02-04 10:16 PM

Fuck lil' Scrap he aint got shit on me. to tell you the truth lil' scrap didnt even stay out past midnight untill he knew me. See if he didnt know me then he would still be a little bitch sitting in his room reading his bible and being his dads bitch. I made lil' scrap and i can kill him to.

Vote so we can be done with this shit.

SweetNess 02-02-04 10:18 PM

That last post was from me. But lil' scrap didnt log out the last time he was on here.

lil' SCRAP 02-05-04 04:44 PM

Uppin for this shit yo. Stop sleepin and get them votes in.

Dope Name 02-05-04 04:58 PM

How old are you guys? twelve?

"Yo, lil' scrap hasn't stayed out past midnight before, and oral sex is a big deal and so is anal foreplay"

This battle is goin' to go to Lil' Scrap

Reason:
Lil' scrap had some sort creativness to is, Sweetness stayed on the same topic, although it was nothing but personals for Sweetness it got boring. Structure was about the same, Flow goes to Lil' scrap, vocab goes to neither of you, the biggest word was "because", Multies, there were none, Metas Lil' scrap

so overall it goes to Lil Scrap

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do

SweetNess 02-06-04 12:28 AM

Fuck you man. How you gona ask how old we are with a name like Dope Name. Shit i bet your lil sister came up with that shit fag.

MYSTERIOSO 02-06-04 12:40 AM

This One Is Goin To Lil Scrap.
He Had Better Punches, Flo, Metaphors All That
Sweetness Need To Elevate.

Vote- Lil Scrap

MYSTERIOSO 02-06-04 12:41 AM

HIT THIS UP IF YOU CAN:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...517#post1160517

SweetNess 02-06-04 12:04 PM

Come on people yall need to vote on this shit. Bitch

SweetNess 02-12-04 08:10 PM

Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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