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FaTaL_LyRiKzZ 02-01-04 10:34 PM

Open Mic 1-10 Feedback FaTaL
 
Swiftly Crackin Yo Brain In Half Or In 3 Quarters..||
Swiftly Killin Ya Lawyers And Reporters..||
Swiftly Squishin Ya Neck With Objects That Are Phenominal..||
Swiftly Hurtin Ya Knees And EmCeEs Abdonimals..||
Swiftly Killin Generations And So-Called Immortals..||
Swiftly Enterin Doors And Unknown Portals..||
Swiftly Thrown Bombs That Cause Headaches And Chaos..||
Swiftly Showin Every Fake EmCeEs Whos The BosS..||
Swiftly Doin This Open Mic Hopin Someone Would Rate It..||
Swiftly Uncoverin Secrets And Stuff That People Admit..||

Swiftly

Sureal 02-01-04 10:36 PM

This Is Gay. Kill Yourself.

yte grl 02-01-04 10:37 PM

i would give u a 4 out of 10
not very good
elevate and keep doin ur thang

FaTaL_LyRiKzZ 02-01-04 10:37 PM

Lol I Dont Need Elavatin THis Is An Old Thing I Did Bout 3 Yrs Ago Just Showin YaLL

NIcE 02-01-04 11:13 PM

I wouldn't tell you to kill yourself just yet but to work on ya shit..4/10
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