DonBlaze {VS} M.C. Shadow
 

u sit frist u know tha rules

Its like all i do is blaze tracks and make dog food outta rappers...i hate to have to kill ya spirit and leave ya hopes and dreams shattered...i dont know why you wanna try me and put my skillz to tha test...im like montana cause when you fuck with me you fuckin with tha best...i still aint seen a mc yet that give me real competition...tha shadow vs. tha don like a pinto against a expedition...i know you heard me last night after i tucked you in bed...i couldnt help it but to scream when ya moms gave me head...but i cant be ya stepdad because ya mom want a trick...all i can do is give her is hard times and hard dick...but imma end it now so everybody can hear yo lame ass spit

aight ile do my verse in a lil bit/////////////////////////

u barly joined today and i already figeu that cha gey/
u say u ride in an expidition by accepting this call u
already failed ya mission/ ive lost ounce but i wont
lose twice yov already gone and u rolled tha dice/ u
are new and can u get a clue u dont post yo verse
on bitch slapped fu(herse the link to what he did in
bitch slapped http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/
showthread.php?t=111489)/
u got less than 50 post and i already know how this
gunna go/ i see this guy pretenteds to be a g but i
now he on his knees prying to god/yuv neva coked
a gun u probly a ritch kid that pretends to live in a
slum

a that link was fucked so here a nutha 1


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111489

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yo people......................................vote for tha don...yall know that i won

yo vote fo shadow cause 13 is the last numbah this
nigga seen

neither were really good
both need to elevate
punches don
personals mc
opener don mc shadows was fucked up
closer both sucked
flow don nothin in mc's rhymed
vote don
keep elevatin

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

yo this wasn't gud but
punches don, more original than shadows
opener don, good openin and shadows was crap
flow obviously don cuz more talented
vote don

upppin .................................................. ....... i need more votes

open
don used something original and mc fed off don's verse. i hate feeding.
don got bar 1
bar 2
don used the scarface a personal favorite of mine. i liked it. was a punch or personal. but it was better than mc's bar
bar 3
mc used a good calll out of a newb mistake but the shit didn't rhyme. it was like aa b. what the fuck. don used a good similie here maybe kinda played. but still a good one.
don got this one
the last bars were pretty bad for shadow. don ripped him even with the use of mama jokes. thats a mama joke(remember the titans).
the don won this one easily

i aint gonna break it down cos don's wrote in paragraph andim too lazy to sort it out into bars...lol..... Don wasnt keen on your opener, the complexity was good, but self prop is a no... you should have hit harder... in the middle there was a couple of ok punches.. but not really hard... same with personals... your closer was the best punch... good to close it on a strong note......
M.C,... first thing is feeding, with ya opener,,, not a good start.... you had a better personal, but the rest of ya punches were weak.... didnt like the link thing... seen it before.... the closer was stretched out and didnt really punch.....
....all in all thought this was a pretty weak battle.... but the vote goes to V=Don