4885 vs LM
 

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no hate votes etc
blind spits

checkin in...

OK OK, check this out...

Ill get ya drunk and doped, and get there via tipsy
LM thinks he’s the best product, but really he’s a pepsi
Fuckin homo! who fucks and sucks men for thin hours
U go down on men, quicker than both the twin towers
Do ya wanna be a millionaire? OK heres your question
Who’s gonna win this battle? Umm, 4885 I’m guessin.
So when I pop my lyrical flair, I rip your bones apart
We aint in Cansis son, ill leave you *lying* without a heart
I aint no Dorothy either, my **click** will be at your heals
We pop teck’s at chest’s, and finish off our beef, like in meals
You all ready know ya lost, coz I think you’re a lil diminished
This battle iz like a series of friends, coz after this line it’s finished

*Lion
**Crew

ok nice battle uppin....

ok uppin for votes, ill return the favour..........

Originality - LM.. other dudes opener was played an continued from there
Punches - LM.. cos they original an alot more consistant
Personals - LM.. obviously did his hwk an dished the dirt
Flow - LM.. other dude was all stand-alone punches

Vote = LM

Drop a vote on either of these:

Vs W1CKED

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

Vs wogzta

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

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this is a veru good example of when a newb takes on a vet.
4885 tried but he was battling like dude was in front of him. Lm attacked with the lyrics you expect to see in an online battle. he was original and used punches and personals.
4885 you will get better after you do a couple of more battles so you can see how they do it on here. my vote to lm.

vote one these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
vote on those

LM wins, it was far from FLAWLESS, but it sure was a FATALITY.
He was more consistent and his punches led on to the next line. His verse was a joy to read except fo the fact he kept talking bout PMing which was getting a bit repetetive.
It's funny to say that the line that stood out most was this one by 4885:

Fuckin homo! who fucks and sucks men for thin hours,
U go down on men, quicker than both the twin towers.
Tho he had the most in your face line, 4885 did not do enuff to secure my vote. He was a bit random(very little).
Due too better structure and flow, LM takes this.

.4885 wanna battle

dont freepost.....................................

yo dis battle was straight LM was gettin some shit off but .4885 battle like he grew up wit dat nigga and knew everything about him so dat 1 under .4885 belt

Originality LM on;y just takes this one
Punches LM his punches hit a lot harder than the other dudes.
Personals LM he hit him with some pretty hard punches here!!
Flow tie both flows were aiight

Vote LM

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I have to agree, so vote LM cuz he had gud punchlines, flow was tied but LM was better so......

Punches, personals, creativity.. everything, its all better in LM's verse... typical vet/newb battle.. 4885 u need to work on all of that and elevate. read some of the other battles, but just dont steal shit. Really nothing left to say about this. 4885 learn how to spell Kansas, and get better disses.. bringing the Twin Towers into that shit is kinda fucked up too, but ah well.

vote- LM