Daffer22 V.S Menolin
 

10 lines
i set up
you spit first
usual rules
no crew, 1 line votes etc etc

good luck!!

aight here it goes

Aight Daffer22 back in da game
Fuck you Menolin and remember my name
Cuz it's gonna haunt you for life
And bitch,shut up,I aint' gonna give you a high-five
Yo this is to wack for words
I’m gonna diss you so bad, it hurts
But I don't have any sympathie
Cuz this bitch needs to learn how to act wit a newbie
So when you hit back we will see
Fuck off Menolin, you're history

your turn Menolin, btw gud luck

yous a waste of time, fuck it a waste of lines,
i could come so hrad my shit dont even ryhme,
even if you spit steerin wheels, no punches direct,
droppin shit like that.....
...makes me think you actually want dis-respect
an now im filling out my lines pro-longin ur loss,
even if i was jesus.... i'm not the type to cross,
only time he bring the heat, when carying coffee,
im like invincible cheats, there nothing to stop me,
i was bored, so i'll let your name be added to my wins,
blah blah blah blah blah, erm... when santa grins?

So bitch wanna play it hard
Don't go there cuz I rip you apart
This battle was already won by me rite from the start
But hey don't get wrong, you just don't got it
You have to be strong, but your lines were shit
Don't even gotta use my mind to hit
Just read my indefeatable spit
You're just some wannabe MC
that doesn't even know who the fuck I be
Cuz from your lines I read it isn't hard to see
That you just been defeated by daffer22, yeah me

only one verse............................................

what can i say newb vs. vet....?...:wtf:.elevate for you challenge sum1 of this stature....
menolins entire verse is obviously superior....what ielse do i say..... daffer werk on direct punches/personals....your wordplay and metas.....structure is alright........

vote - M for OBVIOUS REASONS

had to post to poll my vote^............................................. .........................

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votes plz

Erm...

Menolin took this soooo easily, better punches, personals, flow, creativity.....etc. Daffer....judgin by that verse...it's like you've only been rappin for bout a week.

v/ menolin....obvious reasons

Hit one of the battles up in my sig please!

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no LM it's been 4 weeks so don't judge me, I'm still better than you...... More votes

Do ya think so?......If you've only been rappin 4 weeks you shoulda battled a n00b. Not a vet

need more votes

for the record,he accepted my call out, an no 1 else did!!!
plus elevated no 1 did, when i last checked!!
boredom battles!!

Yeah, again... daff my advice is to read alot of the other battles on here. Your punches aren't personal, they aren't very good.. really no creativity.. i mean I don't know what else I can say. Just read other battles. Menolin, didn't have to do much.. but I was liking some of those lines.

Can you hit up this battle for me, been up about 10 days. Had 8 votes for me but only 4 are counting, I just need it over with so someone plz hit it up!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424
vote- Menolin