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duhble-u 02-02-04 12:48 PM

quick spit about a man
 
when the earth was formed there stood a being so amazing
stood in the middle of creation as a mental patient
crazy but his look was so bold and brazen
it had to be me cause no one else would say this
possesing abilities beyong the average
and could navigate his way through complex laborynths
in school he was always held back
cause he could run ahead of anything that he said and talk back
to his peers, that was real shocker
like seeing a vampire at noon time with blue blockers
he was riddled with bullets and whats even more
he still spit 16 bars before he hit the floor
he understood that the reason to learn is to teach
but didnt comprehend why vegetarian rappers had beef
theres no way to save you from his diabolical danger
his cd cover emits poison gas when you rip the label
hes become a threat, confused on his own say so
like thinking you rich when you have 1000 peasoes
a spectre, but thats only one of the peoples questions
special guessing to dodge fire from different directions
producers dont answer phones when he tries to call
cause they gotta sign diclamers for all the danger involved
hes the best kept secret till the rap game fails
and noone will ever kmow that he played it well. :shoot:

THE DALABIL 02-02-04 12:59 PM

This was crazy. I mean the meta's on keeping it real with a Genesis twist was nice. I'm not saying this because I take stock in the Bible as my only source. It just shows you have depth of knowledge. I felt this straight down the page. Keep playing it. Relationship with the Lord is between man and the Lord alone. No preachers, ministers, no one! Just make sure you keep your focus. One

~RaPiDfIrE~ 02-02-04 02:08 PM

hmmm...kinda hard for some people to understand this...u gotta have an open mind n see the double meanings....I didn't have time to sit there and analyze the whole thing cuz I'm at school...but as far as flow..it was on point...metaphors were tite...the rhymes were pretty good, multis were nice...I'll go back n read this on a deeper level sometime when I have enough time...

peace


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