Born to Kill vs. B.I.Detained
 

I called out for anyone...

He answered up.

10 - 12 lines.

Due in an hour or so.

No hurries, but don't take forever.

Good luck, man.

-In-

Born this cats Garbage..but his Lyrics aint fit for Real Bins
so he had to start a new Thread..just to Glorify his Wins
reached 100 Sins..B2K's sonnes cud even make the Devil Blush
w/ a new Career in Mind..he picked up the Dust-pan & Brush
see now you've reached a Mile-Stone..plz think of your Wife
b/coz wen you're Prized from ya Comp..then maybe she'll get a Life
ya know am Right..smell ya own bed sheets..that'll tell you I'm Best
coz even tho I'm fucking you now..its your Wifey that gets the Rest
leave another Loss chizzled in ya Chest..wots another on 80 +
he's Approachin 200 battles..& prays RB will kick up a Fuss
well if we Must!!..I'll start a new Thread..& tell the whole World
you reached 200...well thats the Combined ages..of B2K & his Gurl

G'luck bra pz

Fucka personal on Brix, we all know him well enough...
Ain't even gotta look, cuz I know he'll spit whack stuff.
See, insults inspire him but he still can't verse, I fear...
Even though all of us have inspired him for over a year.
Descending in revolutions towards abyss, nothin else forseen...
Spittin sick literally, can't flow cuz Brix needs dramamine.
He's just got puny ideas in dissary like tiny microbes...
So lookin in B's ear, is like lookin at a snowglobe.
Slice him in half with wit cuz he's spineless, weak, and fucked...
Like an pearless oyster he's worthless, ain't even fit ta be shucked
Brix failed geometry, thought polygons were dead parrots...
So the closest he'll come is losin by a hare, and his fuckin carrot.

uppin 1

OK, first lemme say, and no offense to either of you, but when I see a battle like this in Elite and reflect on the fact I was removed... I get extremely irritated. Not that this battle wasn't decent... but it def makes me look good enough to be in Elite. Ok, with that said:

B.I. - Opener sucked, weak punches with references to his wife, ect. basically not one hot bar in the verse. Age punches are played, very disappointing.

B2K - Opener illustrated "wack stuff". Sorry man, that was real weak. Couple of decent punches, at any rate better than B.I.'s, but the corny closer almost had me crying. you took this by the hair on ya chinny chin chin

vote - B2K

Seen MADD better from both of you. But oh well look at some of mine LOL pz yall

Dude...

You fuckin rock for voting.

Thanks, Spit

<<< Disagrees Immensly

he still pissed coz he got threw out
& he seems to vote against me everywhere
but dunny matter.. I'll jus av to put
a "Not allowed to vote" list up
next time lol

uppin

Vote - BI Detained

Dunno, this battle wasn't great at all. You guys came pretty weak with the exception of a few lines. B.I. had much better wording to each of his punches, which helped each concept drastically. The age punches were kind of played, but they got a chuckle out of me.

Favorite bar:

reached 100 Sins..B2K's sonnes cud even make the Devil Blush
w/ a new Career in Mind..he picked up the Dust-pan & Brush

vote - youll find out.
BI detained started out pretty good, but then quickly filled with filler. . about BTK's wife..shit ive all seen before against BTK really. the 2000 punch was also played .. never play off on someones age thats been around, its been heard over and over ..
the dustpan line was just average, not really feelin it that much .. on to BTK's verse. .. not very much played material here, if any.. the best line of the battle:

See, insults inspire him but he still can't verse, I fear...
Even though all of us have inspired him for over a year.
That closes it up.

vote -BTK

yo Brix man no hate at all... swear honest votes only, but if you want to ban me from voting on your battles that's up to you. I only 'seem' to vote on all your battles cuz they're usually worth reading so I find them. fuck it man think what you want

Well. I thought Brix won.

But really "vets", you both came corny as shit.

Hardly any punches created much impact from either, but I liked Brix's personals better, with the wife combined age thing and all.

I also thought the dust pan and brush wasnt that bad.

Sorry guys...I'd like to see better from you's.

V/BI

Well, I admit, this wasn't our best outing...

I tried some experimental wordplay...

Guess it came out corny.

Won't speak for Brix...

But, I do appreciate every bit of feedback...

And what little praise we did get.

Will do better.

Peace

Amen B..
true
we shudda thought more
but..we still provided some
entertainment
props B

B.I took the flow on this one, i found it more consistent and more complex than b2k's, The punchlines were about even from both of you, I found faults with a quite a few punches from both of you, the finisher from B.I was wack, but he maintained intelligent punchlines throughout, and thats what really took it for me, the wordplay within it also, Overall i have to give him the vote for a better flowing verse and better worded punches, but this was close,

Good Luck V/B.I Detained