Battle: JamesJr. vs G3mstone
 

Rules:
15- 25 lines
feed if you must
no bitten
no crew votes (etc)
Verse due in hour 5:45 pm est time

Vote poll close 2/22/04

Checking in.......
waiting on you.....


JamesJr.

yo check it u think u ill wen u aint sick callin the shots like vick gettin sacked in the back because the skills u lack/im the all amrerican dream while others just dont seem to be what i want to see/u sit there talkin shit when u gotta put it together bit by bit cuz u cant see what a real mc can see not a wanna be/ i may be a newbie but im the tru mc here crackin open another beer while yur sittin the wonderin how does he have no fear/ u wish u could be me becuase i put up a fight wtihout a fuss whether its now or on the bus ill give u all day to cus / u sure u dont wanna back down and leeve it up to me to wear the crown/ fine ill take it easy beause beatin u is like beatin a babey/ u think u all great like us battlin is some kind of fate please bitch yur a little late/u wanna be nelly wen u fat ass got a belly or u can be a homo like r kelly/yull be sittin at home takin other people stuff while i sit here and make this as smooth as a creampuff/ as this battle come to an end tell a friend whos the mc and whos the wanna be/

I'm underground I crept with the cuts
No wonder now I'm independent as fuck
He's done this fake Eminem sucks...More dick than them feminine sluts
G3stone knows this is what this is
I'm Killing my microphone deliverance.... Cuz I write to the flow belligerent
Now bitches know I like to bone in the midst of this ....
And I'm like the crome equipped the lyrics are clips to spit
I've been fighting to roam with the kids that's pissed
This is it
G3's starving please, How can he alarm when with fiends?
I'm like: If you really wanted beef you'd meet me at Arby's with ease
Where I'll be standing in my Blue Army Fatigues, you can disarm me w/ these
Please?? I'll dis arm you from your arms and your knees
Take a ride, DITCHING YOU IN THE FARMS WITH THE TREES
Them weak rhymes we're not fazing me
You couldn't stop me with Rocafella backed by Jay-z
Like Come on dog you know I'll play the beef
I blaze heat, so stay week Get a job , Then page me
And if not I'll give you a job while I Blaze weed

JamesJr.

Need some feedback....

Honest opinion

Thanx

Yo, I didnt like g3mstones structure at all, dawg u need to set it up a lil more clear. Punches really werent that hard either an flo was choppy, need to elevate a lot!

Jr. I liked ur puinches, an ur structure was pretty good, lackin a little vocab at tha end tho, u coulda closed a lot harder but i was still more intreted in your verse!

My vote goes to James, but good luck to both of u!

had to up it ........
need more votes
Don't I have to wait until my battles are over (as in voted on sin or loss)
be4 I can battle again?

Yea G3mstone,,,,,you lost
i would vote on jamesjr but i cant but yea he won

getting slept .....
waiting to battle other rodents!!!

JamesJr.

4th time uped
I am, never gonna get to battle someone else
til one of these close
Lmao

This is the last up , after that I'll just wait for it to close, and not battle people under 200


JamesJr.