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HW title, Feeble Minded (7-4) vs. Walter Wall (5-1)
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Im Kyle’s therapist, and he’s obviously confused
DéjÃ- vu? Yea I recall the crew…I just can’t remember you Ask….. Bribe, cam, mentill, aisle and taktik, ure frequently sonned Who’s better? Simply Scantron………….all of the above Always bitch’n and moaning, u wail as much as ure libido "Sorry Feeble Minded is a moderator/admin and you are not allowed to ignore him or her." no wonder ure sad, even Vbulletin3 takes shots at your ego! Don’t shout……. Just get blotted out similar to permanent marker You tested me and failed me………...as a tag partner Asking me bout rhymes and women, here’s my advice…quit Just because you’ve got pimples doesn’t mean you’re a pimp! Power trippin mod, A fake, no real estate in which to revel This battles equipped with balconies…I’m on another level This isn’t a challenge, just food for thought…Im digest’n ya Feeble only goes against the grain…during bouts of anorexia Most dope heads haven’t heard of Pheebs, Im not pretending It’s not cuz we don’t watch Friends….its cuz u don’t have any Stay in frontlines and stick with your own kind, go mod newbs I should of stole your check in…..to get the best of you |
you'll get hit in the chin, put in the hospital with pain hidden within,
and await the IV , like a top notch college that you didn't get in .. its fit to begin, but i already got this fight in the bag, only reason ur predicted to win, is cuz your the one writing the mag, im wiping this fag, and all Howard's dickriders cuz i don't feel hype .. & your the only rb battler, that needs a name change in REAL LIFE .. i feel quite - astonished that you hide this shit, its a scandal and, your true alias is 2 % .. you just didn't want to get banned again, you and Bribe, are the tag team champs you strongly insist .. & obviously still havent realized that the league no longer exists! this battle has two losers - walter i dont exclude or pretend, cuz you lost to me in the tourney, and now your fucking losing again i abusively bend, out of shape, and torture lesser kids, & walter puts a thousand dots in his verse & cant form sentences .. the lesson is, that even kids like walter can own stage, with Evolve's nuts for Props, and Rb set as his homepage, you'll leave this fight strangled, with last ounce of might mangled, & ya named walls cuz i make u & the floor form a right angle .. |
i gave walter to edit in another two lines on: Last edited by Walter Wall : Today at 01:06 AM. so word - he was not cheating before someone accuses him.
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word, I thought we were going 16
but its all good ....now lets get some votes! |
Man...this shit is to close to kall....
feeble - your verse was dope as usual....u stayed consistent throughout your whole verse....you had the puches and the wordplay...and a lot of ur shit was funny...i mean real funny...lol..hmm...you had a lot of personals in your verse..which hit hard...and was very affective....overall man...i didn't see anything wrong with your verse... Walter - your verse was also dope man...props...you had the wordplay...the puches...the personals as well...which was hella funny...lol..im still laughing at a couple of them...you had the creativiness....and you worded everything real good... Man..this battle is way too close to call guys.... sooooo....ima give this to both of ya'll....TIE.... Props...i dont usually give ties...but ya'll both deserve it in my eyes... Note * feeble or walter...does Cam's vote count in my battle..since he signed out..?....its kool if it does...just wondering...oh and walter go vote on my battle homie...cause feeble already has...we need more votes...lol...*... Payce! |
V/ Feeble Minded
Wall...i dunno man...i wasn't feeling your verse that much, your opener was probably your best line cuz after that everything else was just played or nahhh, but the closer was ok, i expected some real fire considering this is the heavyweight bout, but overall...an ok verse Feeble...that opener was iight, mag lines starting to get played, i had that used against me this past week on another site so its just played to me, that banned line was iight, your closer clinched it for me, but i give it to you for the fact that your punches were more direct, i could give a fuck about a flow but your flow was on point here, so Feeble got J's vote |
Vote Feebs
This was a pretty good battle man.. At first, i thought Walt had him definately. His verse was dope, punches connected & had some nice personals. But then i read Feebs & he just out did you. He had some witty stuff in there & Overall.. It was better. But respect to both. |
Vote/Feebs
Battle was nice from both n ya cud see the respect coz ya'll came good knowing the other one would Walters verse was nice n witty n gave those usual chuckles wot dint go w/ those punches were 'woah'./..very witty jus not completely hard Feebs was different in he did have wit but he also had a few bars that made me feel it.... nice hard punches w/ wit take shit ^^woohoo that rhymed pz & props these are the kind of battles that shud be in wk in wk out |
wow... this was highly unexpected...
lotta wordplay n' personals... so... let me do this... Feebs... Had I not know WW... alot of that would've been blah... like Jacent said alot was played it's been said... but tis cool... and honestly I can't even pull out a great line... they were all just hittin Walt... WW... you had me up until pimp... the shot's at ya ego was nice... I think you figured it'd beat him... *shakes head* nope... You were doin ya thing though... good job... OH yea... that friends line... LMAO... played but a VERY nice twist... the set up was funnier than the punch... but... I'll take a nice verse over half a good verse any day... Vote: Pheebs... |
Febble now u really impress me. i liked =)
walter same to you much better showing from last week. nice personals full of punches and I think what stood out the best from both your verses was ...My name. It's always great to be mentioned. It shows spark to your verses..lol.. j/k but anyways good read props to both. but I do have to go with Feeble. It did seem close but somehow Feeble just pull that extra rope. V/Feeble |
The 'vb3' line won this, that was the only fresh shit i seen. Nice line.
Vote - Walter not in league -vote doesnt count. -feebz |
Feebs takes this in my opinion. He had overall better, more creative punches.
Walter, seen much better from you. No great punches or personals in yours. Sorry. V/Feebs. |
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