Just Rhymin feat .:FreemaN:. + .:k:.
 

Verse order:
-1- LM
-2- .:FreemaN:.
-3- .:k:.

Enjoy....
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September 2003, I came to destroy rb's dignity
My punches are witty while my OM's are honesty
Some people hassle me, off the net I'm the same
I'm true to myself, my life is around this rap game
I dont ever claim to be somethin I'm not, I aint fake
I let out my soul in every single song that I make
The icein on the cake is when people give me props
But when I battle, thats when the penny really drops
I will reach the top, there aint no disbelief no more
Coz I will keep elevatin til I crumble, fall to the floor
So from my core, I again spit these lines so swiftly
But this time I brought .:FreemaN:.+.:k:. with me

Leah
This girl.. wow she is special.. my angel from above
Touched my heart with her love...
... we go together like hand and glove
At first a thought it was a dream, illusion of my mind
Nice to know she is so kind...
... and that she will always be standing behind
Its solid.. this relationship is designed for us
And we built it together...
... from bricks of trust
Damn girl.. You must be lucky.. To wake up to that reflection
Your like my sexual injection...
... No need for viagra.. your a natural erection
Im your destiny.. And you my future in the making
For us to grow, sacrifices are taken...
... with no hesitation
This time its real.. Ive found my darlin.. Leah
In my opinion.. the best idea...
... is to always have my baby near

ayo peeps nice drop by all...........free and K urs was nice.....LM urs was nice but wasnt as strong as the others in my opinion.......just my opinion no hate nice drop by all

yea ya all came nice, all the verses complimented eachother.

Lm = really good flow as with all ya spits,
thought you could of made it a bit more complex
with more vocab or wordplay, but to be fair to
you that is your style of spittin. still really good tho! 8/9 out of 10

freeman = wow, flow,vocab,wordplay and topic,
a great peice with an unusual style.
thats something new i aint seen before . keep it up. 9/10

K = you also had nice flow not as good as Lm but good.
thought your vocab woz well executed, and ya also had
some nice wordplay. 8/9 out of 10

overall = all came very well, nice piece for instant. overall = 8/9 out of 10

breakdown

flow = Lm
vocab=freeman
wordplay=k
lines=freeman

fave line = Elevating be-ond belief..your disbelief …has no pass on affect,
Cause why should I give a fuck what you think…Im doing it for self-respect,

please return the favour and vote on the battle under my sig.

this was very nice...I've always enjoyed LM's work..Freeman this was the first time I've read your OM and I must say I'm impressed..you had a very good flow going on along with your wordplay...k...your piece was also very nice..overall this was a very nice collab..I see too many collab's on here,which one verse is good and the next one comes in and ruins it..but on this all three of ya'll came very strong..nice work fellas...peace....

yo...the collab was strait fire, all o yall did ur thangs in ur verse n spit to ur fullest..no holdin back...my personal opinion..all o ur verses had no flaws, tho the structure did confuse me but i still felt the flow so it really didnt matta, keep doin ur thangs n hope to see more comin from all o yall
drop sum feedback on mine->http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845

Peace

that was some good shit overall from everybody. Free and K's structure threw me off a bit but the concepts made up for it because tehy all stayed on a certain subject and it all made sense. The best lines were the ones that K closed wit. nice drop yall and thanks for the input LM.

Thanks man... Im gona start doing more OM... Im enjoying it at the moment... lol...

Thanks for all the feedback people...

Uppin a guess... lol... pz

^werd Free Me 2 This Was Mine And Free's 1st Drop's..thx For The Feedback Keep It Cumin...........pz

^............................thx.......pz

^.....pz