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LW title: Lethargic (5-0) vs. Koalatee (1-1)
verses due on friday, 12 pm eastern time.
check ins due by wednesday. have fun. make this good. Try and shit, ya know? Winner moves on to MW title, loser doesnt. Read LLL rules if you don't already know 'em. |
Hi G. Hod...Here's your chance to redeem yourself. ;)
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Chea. Thanks for it. . Let's get this done early.
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Sure, how many lines?
16 it is. GL to you as well. |
Sixteen - I'll post on the morrow. . Good luck.
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The golden boy exposes ploys - next best, I'll send away silver. .
That is, The guy who uses RB dot com as his top resumé builder Team - mom; your style's corny, go on: can and pack the lunches. . While I leave 'champs' played; like the lives of Janet Jackson punches Redemption's sweet I've drempt defeat; dude's known to get cute. . I'd use a 'smoking L' line; but I'm commercial & exposing the Truths® Experimenting? Ha! I'm sure this coward dreams of streudel tasting. . But his balls are still dropping, like Howard Dean's approval ratings Disgraceful crew, its taste askew - my will must murder whiney rhymes Christ. . Your leader still rocks matching tildes (circa '99) Crew- jumper; Wit's End? If I were you, I'd leave or try to quit Because my post-victory laugh does work in redefining wit Raping fawns & taking pawns - then kings: your act must be checkered You're not respected; I've got a shot with quite the lackluster record In conclusion, you jockey me. The song's not an ode nor a gloat, pal. . Take the route of your woeful family and trip over my coat - tails |
I know we agreed to post early, but this is the only league I'm in with a deadline as late as Friday. So, I saved this battle for last...here you go.
A handsome man.. I don't think so..and if you approached that girl in your avy's picture... You'd receive a laugh and your custom title...or the 3rd line in your signature I'm a bit disturbed...Cuz I wasn't that good when we first met you know So how can you take me as a joke..if you couldn't, take me as a joke. Your makin me choke...you're lack of your name does Quality harm And I'll tear you limb from limb........expressin my right to BEAR ARMS! Don't think that I'm alarmed..cuz I'da loved to finish you early, clown.. So, sorry for the delayed post, but I had battles I was actually worried about! You're wack, without a doubt<----that's what your skills left me without, See I'll take away your V a nt a ge, and that R h...leavin you wonderin "ym e?!" The definition of hilarity? Back in the day, kids thought K was a killer...and you know that it's true.. And since you stopped writing the mag? Heh, nobody knows you Kid, you're through.. Even if you're considered one of the best, by all of RB's known people.. Cuz I was considered one of the best, before RB...lost all it's dope people! |
This thread's had an extra 20+ views since I put my verse in here. Vote you bastards :cussing:
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Nice Battle....Koala Came Nice..And Leth Dropped Dope....You Both Had Good Punches..But Alot Of Leth's Just Hit Harder..I Only Saw One Played Line..."Bear Arms" Other Than That Your Verse Was Straight....As For Koala...You Had Some Dope Shit Too....Here's Some Quotables..
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Punches - Lethargic Personals - Lethargic Opener - Lethargic Closer - Koalatee Wordplay - Lethargic Vote - Lethargic...It Doesnt Look Close In The Above Breakdown...But It Was Actually A Good Read...But Plain And Simple...Leths Punches Hit Much Harder...Good Battle.... P.S. To Feeble: Dont You Think The Winner Should Hold The Title For A Few Weeks?? Cuz If Its Ran Like That Then There Will Be No LW Champ Next Week... |
Quality sucks...really...his verse was lame, boring, and everything in between
Lethargic on the other hand had a few nice lines that were humorous Don't think that I'm alarmed..cuz I'da loved to finish you early, clown.. So, sorry for the delayed post, but I had battles I was actually worried about! Back in the day, kids thought K was a killer...and you know that it's true.. And since you stopped writing the mag? Heh, nobody knows you Kid, you're through.. Even if you're considered one of the best, by all of RB's known people.. Cuz I was considered one of the best, before RB...lost all it's dope people! ^straight fire Vote: Lethargic |
Vote - Lethargic
Koalatee came bleh, some ok personals but his punches werent very hard hitting Leth came to win he had more witty-ness consistency and better punches A handsome man.. I don't think so..and if you approached that girl in your avy's picture... You'd receive a laugh and your custom title...or the 3rd line in your signature ^funny shieet |
Embarrassing :rolleyes: - good job, champ. Sign me out, brothers; whilst I pursue a way to stop writing 'lame, boring and everything in between' types of pieces. Peace
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Quality is Dope..jus dint come here
I wuv him Quality..lines jus dint hit & ya gave a lack luster performance wen ya cudda easily threw decent punches if ya only tried a lil chuckled at a few but ya know most was blah!! Leth-Dint come hella dope but ya still showed ya same level of skill. your wit is jus obviously funny. which ya point out into peeps faces. the signature line made me piss. not amazin but wen i looked bk at his sig i jus burst lol. anyways props pz V/Leth check me & Young P |
Leth takes it.
Decent from quality.... But Leth came nice. Good to see Leth finally showing he's dope. Note- I signed in to come for your title Leth. after me having to no show in Written Anguish |
to Fue Xion - either suggest something better or it will be run this way.
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