Killa Status
 

Now im devourin' these cowards, when i spit lyrical showers,
unfoldin niggaz like flowers wit these ill explicit powers,
just bow at his fuckin feet, or prepare for a quick retreat,
cause im not like these other niggaz, im eatin ya pussy beef's,
I repeat, ill open up shop and the dynasty won't be stopped,
bitches pop shit on the streetz till we step on the fuckin block,
when i shock niggaz feel the pain, like needles peircin ya brain,
i'll leave em physically slain, like victims that's hit by trains,
i don't need to mention my name trick's you know its Da Killa,
and im illa than any shit you fuckin bitches deliva
nigga please, backin from challanges aint part of my style,
this Kid's the brand new "Fuck You" posta child,
fuck denial im droppin truth and i ain't claim to be the best,
but im slowly approachin my status puffin out my fuckin chest.

give some feedback cause i wanna know whats wrong with it.

Flow ehh..& nothing was eye popping, some lines where ok... others were blahh.. & I hope this was only a keystyle. Not Bad if it was...If it wasn't, u need alot of work.

it took all of five minutes, but thanks for that.

Lets get some feedback people.
I need to know whats up.

yo homie, this was aiight piece, jus like LM n WD-40 said, this was good fo a keystyle but if it wasnt then u need to elevate n improve jus like im tryin 2 do right now. but overall i liked it... the flow was there...vocab was basic but u used in firery ways..so jus work sum more n u be on ur way to da top
N please return de favor n drop feedback on mine http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111845

Peace

you did have few good lines...but other than that..it was ehh~~~LOL~~~nah not too shabby for a five min~key though~~~peace~~~check out my New OM...Dream or Reality...

uppin for more feedback on this shit