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freeza pop vs lilrenegade89
check due 1 hour 4 now
10-15 lines no dick riders thats mean ur boyfriends votes |
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/. im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/ u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/ freezer get burnt ne day by me/ ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/ ill blow ur ass up n set u free/ |
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll... you try yo ass to run fast... but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else.... Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass... Gnaw on yo bone... Don't condone... Try and rewind and begin again... Go back to your pig pen... Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch! The End! |
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/. ^WOW KILL YOURSELF....JK horrible though and i'm not kidding...... im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/ u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/ ^so simplistic a 3rd grader could spitit...... freezer get burnt ne day by me/ ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/ ill blow ur ass up n set u free/ ^this is even worse hey man you forgot one fish 2 fish red fish blue fish.....quite now or elevate drastially...you are not dope......ego check.... Renegatorade searchin' for the soul... sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll... ^HOlY COW whats with the simplistic shit are we all in elementary school... you try yo ass to run fast... but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else.... ^I'm just speechless.....confused....it makes no sense.... Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass... ^WHERE THE FUCK DID THIS COME FROM?...WTF ARE SAYINg?/ Gnaw on yo bone... Don't condone... ^this is just like crack ticks...your like terets or something right? Try and rewind and begin again... Go back to your pig pen... Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch! the end.... WOW ok ......I dunno whether to slit my wrists or vote....i guess i would have to go with Rengade sorry y'all ELEVATE OR LEAVE HURTS MY HEAD TO READ SHIT LIKE THIS.... |
i wasn't done dick fuck look here hold up i wasn't done
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/ this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/. im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/ u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/ freezer get burnt ne day by me/ ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/ ill blow ur ass up n set u free/ this bitch ain't got no green/ his whole family poor/ they all freezin there ass off, sleepin on the floor/ ill put u in deep freeze u won't breath with ease/ ittl take a nuke ta make ya rhymes hot/ i know you be dickriden bitch ur jsut caught/ u post ur first verse/ who the fuck could wite worse/ ya shits not better than mine/ u can't take the 9/ ill stick with the auto matic/ the shit ima bout ta do to u is gunna b tragic/ why u gunna mess with me/ when u gunna learn that ur/ ass is jsut plain old freezer burn/ |
uppin 1 vote on the 2nd rhyme i accidently ssent the first one early
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OK freeza die pleas..you need to learn how to stuctuer your shit better and work on punches........LIL you had some OK shit but wasnt really feelin it..you both need to elevate and work on it more..by far the weakest battle of all time...
ok heres the break down punches:LIL had some ok punches freeza i wasnt feelin any of um. flow:nethier of u had flow in this battle structuer:freeza ya structuer was wack as hell/LILyours was to but it was better then freeza's wordplay:nethier of you had any wordplay,u need to learn how to use the words alittle better with out streching your lines personals:LIL had some personals on freeza,freeza didnt have 1 good personal on LIL....come on guy's this rap shit is easy,try not to talk abpout your self in your battles but diss the hell out of the person you are VSing....hopefuly i have helped u guys out..........*1* my vote: lilrenegade89.............. |
Yo Lilrenegade like killed this dude once again freeza pop sound like i had for a snack this afternoon and like his rhymes are so broke and like i'm ashamed to even read what the hell he spit Renagade up one! By the way holla at me i wanna battle
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uppin this shit. Drop a link for ya girl. Peace
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Uppin this shit please drop an honest vote here
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yo LIL this is a girl u battled HAHA im gunna laugh if she win's LMAO.....J/k...good luck.....peace hommie......
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uppin vote please
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huh?
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I feel ya, U killed him, keep it up nucca, U the shit |
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