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StreetzGullie vs .iLL.
10 line min........12 max
no d/r no hate no crew no bytin.......or dqed due in 30 min..........or dqed peace :thefinger |
checkin up, checkin in, let this BEGIN!
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fuck the "sweet" shit dawg.........im spittin it raw::
cause my bullits are like "gum".....the way the stick to ur jaw:: dont need to key more....^^there is already enough said:: cause my punches are like brain surgoens....they ALWAYS bust heads: fuck ryhmes.....when it comes to dealin wit this dummy:: ill just the hawk to ya HEAD...and give u in ".iLL." feelin in ya TUMMY:: tellin him the truth......someone musta lied to this thug:: he dont know my belt carries more bombs...then bin laden on drugs:: fuck 10......u coudlnt kill me...if i was spittin 3:: cause ya names the only way....your ever "sicka" to me:...1 |
"fuck 10......u coudlnt kill me...if i was spittin 3::
cause ya names the only way....your ever "sicka" to me:...1" "fuck 10......u coudlnt kill me...if i was spittin 3:: cause ya names the only way....your ever "SICK" to me:...1" supposed to read that^^^^^.......mybad |
.iLL. checked in at......12:39 am............it is now.........1:19..............rules say 30 mins.........or dqed...................its has been 40 min...............dqed!........1
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Streetz throwin "grenades" at "UPS" the way he "blowin the males(Mails)/
Strangled-in-veils, couldn't "feel" my "words" if I spit em "in Brail"/ This welfare faggot is next, snatchin ya check* while I'm stabbin an' gashin ya neck/ Man, if you ever drop a CD - I swear ta God I'll go back to cassettes!/ ~ StyLe SwitCh ~ Yo I'm mean, rough, and Born-to-Kill/ I'll 'leak' ya rhymes out like a Foreman Grill/ Splatter ya like Windex on my windowsill/ You get 'chomped' in this battle like a dill pick-ill(pickle)/ **FiNiShEr** I beam hits from lightning, quick sick spits sharper words than suicidal slit wrists/ I'll choke ya so hard Till u 'Blue'** in the face ppl think u was teamed wit crips/ *= paycheck **= his font is blue, like crips color.. y0 .. uppin for votes people..thanks! |
yo man i thought it was 30 minute after your post...
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i never said i spit first........i jsut said due in 30 min..............shoulda read the rules more clear..............................1
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yea, you said you'd spit first..in the challenge..i said you spit first, and you agreed bro..
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uppin
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i liked both verses this is a hard one to vote on. this is what its about. two different styles which one wins out. ill go with streetgullie first
gullie was gutta like his name. i could picture him battlin on stage. the only thing i didn't like was no personal didn't attack the opponent at all. so you know this one would have to go to judges on his part no knock out. but i his flow was nice and vocab wasn't dull ill he was all over the place. like he was overwhelming his opponent. first he setting him up with jabs. the opener was nice. it wasn't your typical gay joke. a good metaphor the style change is cool. thats like the quick combo. alot of punches get your opp disoriented. then when he gets used to it. back to the basic one two. (the close). an effective one at that. vote to ill. but gullie just use punches next time. vote on these http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138 |
flow-tie
punches-ill style-ill wordplay-tie creativity-ill personals=ill overall-ill Ill came with harder punches, and was more creative. I thought streetz was too simple with the disses, gully or not i'd say not. work on the punches, you gotta embariss his ass so use more personals. As for ill, work on the flow more your change of style screwed the flow up, i wouldn't be changin styles often stick wit the first. still your punches were better. vote-ill fav line only one...ill- Quote:
drop an honest vote on my battle with ghostie thanks. pzzz |
uppin!!!, post a fair vote, i post a fair vote on your battle too.
Gracias :P |
First off, dont' DQ for that shit... nobody respects that.. don't be gay
This battle was surprising nice in my mind. Streez u got a lot better I can see, I like that. Had some punches I liked.. some hit nice. I think you just went up against someone with a little more this time. Ill provided a nice battle on his side, and I think got you. His punches were a little better, better personals.. more creative.. but streetz man.. not bad at all. vote- ill Hit up my battle please.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111802 |
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