One of ma first songs eva (Lone Solja)
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/freshemceemusic.htm

its lone solja, i got others there too. i've made quite a bit.
juz some helpful feed back wud be nice. hope ya'll get da meaning behind it. da quality isnt gr8 but i bought a new mic recently and i mite re record.
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* Listening *...beat is kool...i def like this beat...its got that vibe to it..like it makes u wanna do something...hmm...flow is ehh..not really on point...that's a major issue...lryics are aight...creative...well not really..but u know what i mean...your right..quality isn't that great...the beat is louder than ur voice...with the new mic u got..that should help..just work with the volume...but the 1 thing u did...was stay consistent...and that's a big factor...overall...i give this track a 6/10...props..keep doin ya thang...stay up dude...

if u can...check out my new song..47 Popstars....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111395

feedback is much appreciated homie...

Thanx....

and One Luv Man...

~KJ~

thanks homie, im checking ur song out now uppin

Beat is pretty much cheesy, sounds like someone just found the 808 drum machine.

Flow, choppy, delivery the same. Voice, ehhh.....lyrics...

not really feelin this here man, sorry

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111810

.OnE HuNeD'.

yeh aiight uppin still............................................. ..................................