cutastraphe vs wise ways
 

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This fools gassed..& his rhymes definatly aren't fucking dense
How wack are you?..Its depends..
.................................cuz his sig dosen't even make sense
But ya name makes sense..Everytime u spit..its a cutastraphe
Punches smother & stick to u..so they leave u stuck actually
U dwelling in tha belly of a herb..But yet i found u in its chest
..Cuts like tha Panthers to me..man u just simply not tha best
Fag..u better view tha poll results..cuz i make u eat shit & die
Give u an L for ya birthday..But u even know it wasn't a suprise
........Cut trys to jump on me..& still fails miserably to top mine
Ya structures somewhat like ya status..cuz you always offline
U queer..looks like you had a race with wackness..it caught him
bitch thinks he is elevating..but..
.............I'm at tha top of tha dogpile..when your at tha bottom



keyed...fast..umm no changing ya stuff till this battles done..
g/l....no herb votes either

yo this is your end, and son you better gather your wits*
cuz i'll give you one way out of this battle-it's not wise to spit*
rather choke yourself first, befo i leave you a mark
beatin apart-can't see wisdom-here's a leadin to smart*
you a ghostin faggot, always remainin offline
with flows that's shot fuckin dead you givin brain to a nine
it's a little late, i'll delete your style for a period of enjoyment*
but after i took that away....your still appearin as boring
sneerin and snoring, i'm sleepin on u like a narcoleptic
cuz your filler lines all bottom out, ass-like a fart disected*



*WITS END(his crew)
*one wise way out of this is to lose
*his avy says wisdom(nigga gotta 2 IQ)
*.....his style is all like this with periods
* get down to the bottom of a fart, it's all ass...lol

You ain't even gonna meet ya own time limit?
Damn...hurry up...

good spitt...let's get some votes...sorry i went a lil long i was addin the explanations.

goodluck

This fools gassed..& his rhymes definatly aren't fucking dense
How wack are you?..Its depends..
.................................cuz his sig dosen't even make sense
^decent personal
But ya name makes sense..Everytime u spit..its a cutastraphe
Punches smother & stick to u..so they leave u stuck actually
^ok punches
U dwelling in tha belly of a herb..But yet i found u in its chest
..Cuts like tha Panthers to me..man u just simply not tha best
^decent
Fag..u better view tha poll results..cuz i make u eat shit & die
Give u an L for ya birthday..But u even know it wasn't a suprise
^ok
........Cut trys to jump on me..& still fails miserably to top mine
Ya structures somewhat like ya status..cuz you always offline
^hahaha dope
U queer..looks like you had a race with wackness..it caught him
bitch thinks he is elevating..but..
.............I'm at tha top of tha dogpile..when your at tha bottom
^ehh decent closer


yo this is your end, and son you better gather your wits*
cuz i'll give you one way out of this battle-it's not wise to spit*
^ok but played
rather choke yourself first, befo i leave you a mark
beatin apart-can't see wisdom-here's a leadin to smart*
^whack
you a ghostin faggot, always remainin offline
with flows that's shot fuckin dead you givin brain to a nine
^played
it's a little late, i'll delete your style for a period of enjoyment*
but after i took that away....your still appearin as boring
^weak
sneerin and snoring, i'm sleepin on u like a narcoleptic
cuz your filler lines all bottom out, ass-like a fart disected*
^umm...yeah

Wise takes this...he had some good punches and less used personals. ALso his rhymes were more original and less played. Good battle tho for you Cutastraphe...kee it up

Please drop an honest vote here...I took the time for you...thanks. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074

Originality - Wise.. "ghostin" an "not wise to spit" = played
Punches - Wise.. funnier an consistant.. nice meta4s
Personals - Wise.. worked em better an made em harder hittin.. also more of em
Flow - Both.. easy to follow

VoTe = Wise

Drop a vote here plz:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

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Wise Ways-good verse..nice disses..not too many played..good line structure..although i HATE THE
....................................Bullshit..get me?
flow was good..not too many flows I can see..overall..this was a good verse..I will give it a 8.6/10

Cut-wack ass verse when it comes to punches..disses about Wit's end or terrible and played..personals was garbage..flow and structure was decent..but not alot of highpoints..or nothin that made me say ..oo..or damn..keep elevating..I will give your verse a 5/10
v/wise ways..it was a murder

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&page=1&pp=15
hit that up^^

Nice Battle but Wise Took This Hands Down He Had An Overall Better Verse Which Stayed On Point & Was More direct Then Cuts..............


VOTE= WISE

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Uppin for tha ko...................
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Fucking shit bitch cunt monkey.............
Vote!......#3

This fools gassed..& his rhymes definatly aren't fucking dense
How wack are you?..Its depends..
.................................cuz his sig dosen't even make sense
^good personal puch a fine opener....
But ya name makes sense..Everytime u spit..its a cutastraphe
Punches smother & stick to u..so they leave u stuck actually
^bahahah nice personal..........
U dwelling in tha belly of a herb..But yet i found u in its chest
..Cuts like tha Panthers to me..man u just simply not tha best
^meh.......not bad........
Fag..u better view tha poll results..cuz i make u eat shit & die
Give u an L for ya birthday..But u even know it wasn't a suprise
........Cut trys to jump on me..& still fails miserably to top mine
this is a ok punch............
Ya structures somewhat like ya status..cuz you always offline
U queer..looks like you had a race with wackness..it caught him
bitch thinks he is elevating..but..
.............I'm at tha top of tha dogpile..when your at tha bottom
^Kinda weird rhyme scheme right here but weee straight!!!!



yo this is your end, and son you better gather your wits*
cuz i'll give you one way out of this battle-it's not wise to spit*
^ i like it.....good play off the crew........
rather choke yourself first, befo i leave you a mark
beatin apart-can't see wisdom-here's a leadin to smart*
^nah this was filler.............
you a ghostin faggot, always remainin offline
with flows that's shot fuckin dead you givin brain to a nine
^this is interestin wordplay but........no
it's a little late, i'll delete your style for a period of enjoyment*
but after i took that away....your still appearin as boring
^ths is a weak punch
sneerin and snoring, i'm sleepin on u like a narcoleptic
cuz your filler lines all bottom out, ass-like a fart disected*
^this is a strange Meta4..........

wise takes this with harder more personal punches granted caustropehe prolly didn't know wise very well but still.....pz
hit this up if you can vote...repay favor or die..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=TheUnderRated

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Cut came ok, had some wordplay attempts, flowed nicely...
But his punches were just so soft.
And really, like I said, the wordplay was an attempt.

However, Wise dished out some nice personals...
Utilized better wordplay...
And definately hit harder.

The "Panthers", "Offline", and the "Dogpile" closer got this for ya.

The rest was ok, but nothing nearly quotable.

Decent battle at best.

Cut was just clearly outclassed.

Peace

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