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-Smoke- V.S menolin
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i set up you spit first usual rules i checked you other battle, you seem nicer than some peeps on this site, so i wont wish you luck!! |
-Smoke-'s back, spittin fire with a black-tongue,
Menolin bit my style, so he left with black-lungs... tellin me "you nicer than some peeps on this site, I peeped you"... damn right menolin, and that includes you... -Smoke-'s no joke, givin out all L's so dont show up, where there's -Smoke- there's "fire", so when I spit atcha, ill dry ya "flow" up... under ya name, reads "still the same", your manure, i guess some things "never change"... this verse ends it for this bastard, Menolin! the UK's version of viagra... |
Where are you Lyrical MC...Are u gonna spit or what...?
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i mean..MENOLIN...where r u gonna spit or what...?
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yo, i just got in, i sent you a PM to say i would drop later!!!
time to merk!! you got my name wrong... no need to dazzle you with punches, now-a-days newb and wack.... come tied together in bunches, i don't toke back herb...... but i still manage to 'smoke' this kid, his punches never direct... he spits with the neck of an invalid, your that unlucky piece of grass, that this dog chose to shit on, dont do audio, cos you couldn't blow up wax explosive crayons, i destroy you with a 15 minute key... watch as i unlock the win, i jus keep bowling him over............ like he one of alley pins, come harder next time... be 'only the weak' dont survive, you should be counting you beats, they is jus keepin you alive. blah, |
good verse...let the votes roll in...only time will tell...
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punches:menolin..menolin waas strong in this subject almost every bar had a punch...smoke u tried to force them but only had mainly fillers
flow:menolin menoline u had decent flow good length lines...smoke some of ur lines was a bit strenchy and u keep rhymin the same 2 words wordplay: smoke menoline u cam weak in this subject..smoke u had good wordplay none was played Personals:tie] u both came alright..and both made an eqaul amount of good disses Vote:Menolin |
-Smoke-'s back, spittin fire with a black-tongue,
Menolin bit my style, so he left with black-lungs... tellin me "you nicer than some peeps on this site, I peeped you"... damn right menolin, and that includes you... -Smoke-'s no joke, givin out all L's so dont show up, where there's -Smoke- there's "fire", so when I spit atcha, ill dry ya "flow" up... under ya name, reads "still the same", your manure, i guess some things "never change"... this verse ends it for this bastard, Menolin! the UK's version of viagra... __________________________________________ i would haave too say that this was ok,and thatsabout it so homie you had some punches but i felt they came choppy and ya structure was off too,whats with the up being 1 line any ways 5/10 ratio,next time have better directed personals __________________________________________________ ___ you got my name wrong... no need to dazzle you with punches, now-a-days newb and wack.... come tied together in bunches, i don't toke back herb...... but i still manage to 'smoke' this kid, his punches never direct... he spits with the neck of an invalid, your that unlucky piece of grass, that this dog chose to shit on, dont do audio, cos you couldn't blow up wax explosive crayons, i destroy you with a 15 minute key... watch as i unlock the win, i jus keep bowling him over............ like he one of alley pins, come harder next time... be 'only the weak' dont survive, you should be counting you beats, they is jus keepin you alive. __________________________________________________ _____ aight this was pretty good,more of a vet mentality went into this had some decent punches that were directed soley to his oponent nice structure,and flow was more consistant in this wordplay but 8/10 __________________________________________________ _ vote/Manolin hit up one of my threads in my sig please since i took the time man,thank you |
1 st tuppin
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-Smoke-'s back, spittin fire with a black-tongue,
Menolin bit my style, so he left with black-lungs... decent tellin me "you nicer than some peeps on this site, I peeped you"... damn right menolin, and that includes you... weak -Smoke-'s no joke, givin out all L's so dont show up, where there's -Smoke- there's "fire", so when I spit atcha, ill dry ya "flow" up... whaknes under ya name, reads "still the same", your manure, i guess some things "never change"... weak this verse ends it for this bastard, Menolin! the UK's version of viagra... played as fuck you got my name wrong... no need to dazzle you with punches, now-a-days newb and wack.... come tied together in bunches, decent i don't toke back herb...... but i still manage to 'smoke' this kid, his punches never direct... he spits with the neck of an invalid, ok punches and personals your that unlucky piece of grass, that this dog chose to shit on, dont do audio, cos you couldn't blow up wax explosive crayons, [bkinda weak man][/b] i destroy you with a 15 minute key... watch as i unlock the win, i jus keep bowling him over............ like he one of alley pins, lol whack come harder next time... be 'only the weak' dont survive, you should be counting you beats, they is jus keepin you alive. nice metas and punch Menolin takes this pretty easy..good stuff. SMoke started off codd with his first bar, but then fellof after that. He came with too many played and unoriginal punche. Menolin had a decent overall verse which was more than enought for the win. Please peep this honestly guys,shits been open forever. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074 |
Alright smoke ya verse was alright but Menolin ate you on this one dog. Menolins verse had the better flow, cause it was consistent all the way through. Smoke had the better metaphors but menolins punches came harder, and his wordplay was expanded more. Smoke you used up and you twice in teh lines and that shit aint gonna fly. Smoke also had a better opener but his closer wasn't that great. menolins opener was alright but his closer finished off my choice.
VOTE_MENOLIN Open battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105181 |
2cnd up, an poll ya vote.............................
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3rd up
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flow-smoke
style-smoke punches-tie wordplay-menolin personals-menolin creativity-menolin overall-menolin smoke good flow, couple ok punches, nice structure. menolin your flow was messed up a lil, ok punches though, structure was good. I think menolin came with more personals and punches and was more creative. vote-menolin fav lines smoke Quote:
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pzz drop an honest vote when blend drops and on the one with ghostie....thanx |
ill drop a vote in a few minutes....
uppin 4 |
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