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Born To Kill 02-03-04 09:51 AM

Born to Kill vs. ~Phil~
 
I asked for a quick battle...

Heup and answered.

10 lines.

Due asap.

Check in and drop.

I'll have mine up in a minute.

Good luck.

~Phil~ 02-03-04 09:56 AM

Checking in...

I Will drop soon after you.

Born To Kill 02-03-04 10:05 AM

Don't care ta know Phil, maybe he's an alias, maybe he ain't...
But I see he's from England, couldn't spit blackness if he spit paint.
My verse is the main attraction, ya nothin, there I've said it...
I'm tha reason peeps are readin, you'll get ignored like credits.
Ya just ain't the real thing, though ya may be fun, my man...
At least fat bitches like you, fully charged in tha nightstand.
Ya just a bad joke, completely played out is what ya are...
Consider Phil similar to, "A rabbi, priest, and monk walk into a bar."
It's easy rippin hits on this pussy, like smackin doubles and triples...
I've completely exposed you a bitch, like Janet Jackson's nipple.

~Phil~ 02-03-04 10:24 AM

Born-to-Kill in this battle its better if you don?t show up like Porn-on-ya-Bill
Stunning shows of wit "Anally raping me" is the only time your "Cumming close to my shit"
At JUNCTURES I REVEAL, Your Best-to-Steer-clear, ya text-career is like a PUNCTURED WHEEL cos you need to Re-Tyre!
You aspire to acquire the required to leave me expired, you can conspire but it wont transpire got the desire but you uninspired, some THOUGHTS NEEDED being a "ASTRONAUT WEEDED" is the only time you a "High-Flyer"
I'm "heavyweight gold" your lucky to get "Intercontinental"
Wit Nonchalance-I-win my hype-grows like "sponsoring psycho?s"you "Fund-A-Mental"
You win? It aint raining-in-hell so your obtaining "McPherson" cos you gaining an "Elle" (L)

bonez1000 02-03-04 10:43 AM

lol i dont even know if i need to go into detail...BTK was throwing punches that straight knocked your momma out.

Don't care ta know Phil, maybe he's an alias, maybe he ain't...
But I see he's from England, couldn't spit blackness if he spit paint.

hell of an opener

It's easy rippin hits on this pussy, like smackin doubles and triples...
I've completely exposed you a bitch, like Janet Jackson's nipple.

closer again, nice everything.... current event

he ripped u. knuff said.

vote BTK

Ven0m 02-03-04 11:10 AM

Yo Born to Kill merked it, his verse had way better punches, better flow, better structure, and better vocab...
Phil your verse was whack, u had some what of a flow and the structure was off..
so my vote goes too BTK

Hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111747
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111608

Wise Ways 02-03-04 11:25 AM

Meh..one sided battle here...
B2k came correct..with hard punches through out
Nice opener and really nice closer...
Phil you need to work on ya flow lil choppy in placesol
Wordplay was old..and ya punches wasn't hittin hard
Get rid of tha-shit-inbetween-tha-words

so

v/ B2k

hit this up with an honest vote....4th page slept on....thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111324&page=1

Daffer22 02-03-04 11:38 AM

yo vote Born to kill cuz way better punchlines he had a gud flow goin on an had a gud structure so vote BTK

Diverse 02-03-04 11:44 AM

yo BTK came through with harder hitting punches and more creative wordplay on this one....the rabbi,pries,monk line had me rolling and it was pretty much funny throughout the entire verse

phil, you had some decent shit too my man but your flow is off, it needs to be written better so people can see your verse run smoothly...your verse was fairly creative as well, i saw some nice meta4's and shit but btk just overtook this one

vote/BTK......please return the favor and vote on the battles in my sig..one.

bonez1000 02-03-04 11:46 AM

sorry to free pist i already put in my votes for ya guys..return the favors please!


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111751

$pitacular 02-03-04 12:51 PM

Ok,

Born - took this as usual, decent punches, I thought the opener was weak (spit paint? eh..) but overall you stay consistant - the mark of a vet. More personals would be nice

Phil - nice drop, I think you have madd potential, work on ya structure, it will help people feel ya verse more, I thought you had it but you weren't consistant, which is important. Good job though, stick to it

vote = Born

yall drop a vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111735

TheUnderRated 02-03-04 12:58 PM

Don't care ta know Phil, maybe he's an alias, maybe he ain't...
But I see he's from England, couldn't spit blackness if he spit paint.
^hehe a punch but only an ok one eheh
My verse is the main attraction, ya nothin, there I've said it...
I'm tha reason peeps are readin, you'll get ignored like credits.
^nice nice i liked it alot..good punch good meta......
Ya just ain't the real thing, though ya may be fun, my man...
At least fat bitches like you, fully charged in tha nightstand.
^meh this was ok.....
Ya just a bad joke, completely played out is what ya are...
Consider Phil similar to, "A rabbi, priest, and monk walk into a bar."
^creative and a good punch.....
It's easy rippin hits on this pussy, like smackin doubles and triples...
I've completely exposed you a bitch, like Janet Jackson's nipple.
^bhahhah nice use of current events for a good punch...


Born-to-Kill in this battle its better if you don?t show up like Porn-on-ya-Bill
Stunning shows of wit "Anally raping me" is the only time your "Cumming close to my shit"
^this is ok the sex line is played the meta on the first line is ok though...
At JUNCTURES I REVEAL, Your Best-to-Steer-clear, ya text-career is like a PUNCTURED WHEEL cos you need to Re-Tyre!
You aspire to acquire the required to leave me expired, you can conspire but it wont transpire got the desire but you uninspired, some THOUGHTS NEEDED being a "ASTRONAUT WEEDED" is the only time you a "High-Flyer"
^holy shiat thats stretched alot of multis but you lost the effect of your punch
I'm "heavyweight gold" your lucky to get "Intercontinental"
Wit Nonchalance-I-win my hype-grows like "sponsoring psycho?s"you "Fund-A-Mental"
You win? It aint raining-in-hell so your obtaining "McPherson" cos you gaining an "Elle" (L)^ehhe i like this last line but its not enough to take out B2k he came to well ...
Vote-B2k..plz return favor...this is slept on and its a nice topical battle...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111620

DNUFO2 02-03-04 01:04 PM

BTK gets my vote cause of punches
I think this Phil guy has great potential though.

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Edicius 02-04-04 07:14 AM

V/ Btk, actually punches, very nice one, other cat bleh lacked most of that, i didnt feld his verse, he tryed good, but most seem fillers.. Vote Btk due Actual punches..


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