Puertoricanelly vs. Mario
 

10-15 lines
no crew votes
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you bust first

ill spit with in a hour cause i have to do work or sumshit ok

hey puertoricanelly hows it going ?
wait a sec is that your mum that your hoein
man i cant fuck wit you so i better be going
look my lyrics arent that good or even great
but atleast i got bitches that help me masturbate
im the doctor thats in the house
can any one help this young lady hes afraid of the mouse
10-15 lines isnt gonna help you so your lines better be good
mutha fucka your gonna get kicked out of the hood
well i gotta go back to school
thats sumthing that you wouldnt know about fool

you might be in school but in the 1st grade,
someone save this child, hes in the middle of a mascarade/
i hate to make lil kids cry but i feel good about the situation,
ill beatcha with ma bare hands youll need a new personification/
ill hitchu so hard youll see day time at night,
i aint worryin cuz yo battle didnt even start off right/
killin is a business but i take it much stronger,its ok if your dead by now cuz itd be hard for me to stay alive any longer,
jus hearin my rhymes gotchu feelings good all over,
you aint even hit puberty yet but still you say daddy please go lower/
i give you your last rhyme as a simple "what the hell were you thinking",
im new to RB and your a FLYWEIGHT, now who need to lower their ranking???

uppin votes

Flow:Puert had better flow, Mario your flow was ok but your verse was too basic u need to work on that

Punches:Puert had more hard hittin punches like I said Mario ur shit was too basic..what i think is that ur just looking for a whole clutter of words too rhyme together...Puert had the better wordplay and punches in this battle

Structure:Tie, Both of your structures were fucked up..uneven..short lines too long lines..u guyz need to elevate on that

Vocabulary:Puert had the better vocab, and he used it well in the lines that he spat..mario's vocab was way too basic and should be rearranged...

overall:Puert took this battle hands down he came out with wittier punches and mario verse was wack..you guyz need to elevate on some shit...Puert u got my vote

By the way hit this battle up and vote honestly on it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...823#post1154823

<------------------ uppin for da votes come on ppl

This battle goes to Puerto Rican Nelly His punch Lines Hit Harder.
He had better structure......................................... ..........
Mario was to plain probaply because he's from Brisbane, Australia.

oi it doesnt matter where im from hiphop isnt a area code some shit like that uppin for votes

<------------------uppin for votes number 3 come on ppl

Breakdown:

Mario
Punches: 5/10
flow:4/10
Multies:2/10
Metas:3/10
Personals:3/10
Structure: 4/10 (work on that)
Total: 21

Pnemonia boy
Punches: 6/10
Flow: 6/10
Metas: 5/10
Multies: 2/10
Personals: 3/10
Structure:6/10
Total:28/60

Numbers don't lie, pretty weak battle overall, but pnemonia boy's finisher was tight, but you weren't consistant with 'em so one punch couldn't sway the whole category...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do...

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<---------------------- uppin number 4 look just vote ppl

Breakdown:

Mario
Punches: 5/10 (okay punches not much that hit hard)
flow:4/10 (wasn't feelin' your flow too much, work on it)
Multies:2/10 (there were none in this battle, and default score for me is 2)
Metas:3/10 (you didn't really have any metas either, you should try to incorperate those in your future verses)
Personals:3/10 (Diss the person, don't just say stuff that you could put in a battle against me)
Structure: 4/10 (the structure was off,work on that)
Total: 21

Pnemonia boy
Punches: 6/10 ( pretty nice punches, nothin' too amazing)
Flow: 6/10 (you got a pretty nice flow and i was feelin' it kinda)
Metas: 5/10 (well you didn't use many, but you used enough to score you a 5)
Multies: 2/10 (once again default score is 2)
Personals: 3/10 ( you also needed to incorperate some personals so it brings more to the punches)
Structure:6/10 (you had a pretty nice structure)
Total:28/60

Numbers don't lie, pretty weak battle overall, but pnemonia boy's finisher was tight, but you weren't consistant with 'em so one punch couldn't sway the whole category, the punches were taken by pnemonia boy and just was about everything else, Mario work on your punches, structure definately and your multies and metas...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112201 You guys know what to do...

(this vote shouldn't get DQ'd)

eh.... it won't let me vote again, sorry

i would still appreciate it if you voted on my battle...