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Da NFamous 02-03-04 09:30 PM

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bleh, hope it doesnt waste too much of your time, just felt like throwing words together


picture a world without the need for conformity niggas not boring wholes in hoes and peace is the normalcy

written speach is authored orally personally i feel every person is weak we're all culprits of disloyalty royally disperse words from earth to mercury

trust the trekking of a star spangling trekky liquor me wrecking me like lex luthor i stunt on supermen preaching complexity

wonder why my tongue two steps to the beat of a ballin buzz im too tall to be small my heart huge cause i've fallen in love

sorry it produced the thought process of a schizophrenic it was apallingly misleading failing thoughts i hope theres no apology needed

1luv.

Da NFamous 02-08-04 01:58 PM

umm, i was hoping for a reply so i'll up this, 1luv.

LadyWun 02-08-04 04:18 PM

it was very confusing... it didnt seem to be having a destination.. meaning it sounds
tight when you say it real fast but what are you trying to get at? at first it was
sounding good... but then as it went on it was mushed together without making any
real sense... help me to understand

Da NFamous 02-08-04 04:30 PM

^Umm im on some Aesop shit, just spitting with a vague path, try to take the words as they are and dont look for a deep meanig, be vague, 1luv.

filed 02-10-04 01:04 PM

when i started reading this i thought i had the idea of where you were going to take it, but that i was wrong. and really im not sure where you did take it, i have so many different thoughts now going throu my head from those few lines that really its crazy. it mentions alot of different topics, but all relates somehow. although there isnt really a point or a message it seems to this piece, it flows well and sounds good. your vocab was awsome also. the whole piece reminds me of abstract somehow.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

Da NFamous 02-13-04 09:06 PM

^Thanks ma, still looking for replies, elevation is key, 1luv.


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