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Hit_Man 02-03-04 10:36 PM

Rules of tha Game
 
Since day 1, out tha crib n diagnosed wit Sickness
When i waz 5 niggaz was suprissed how well i knew tha buisness....
Stay away from bitches, but always gettin pussy none the less
Neva be 1 to stress... and in audience of violent niggaz, talkin wit gunz is best
Remove ya lungz from chest, got niggaz gaspin fo breath
Lead + Skull equations end wit... reactions o death
Ready fo action unless, a niggaz to late fo rest
Stay at a steady pace eatin Mc's wit time to contemplate / digest
Dun stray from gangsta law, remember ta keep ya lead tucked
n go out wit gunz blaze'n, be sho to keep ya head up
Fuck a cop, niggaz aint shit witout radios n Badges
No matta how many niggaz r hate'n, continue to murda these faggets

-freestyle
[feedback]

High Class 02-03-04 10:48 PM

It was a simplistic flow over all. I dont much like those subjects anymore, but I kinda liked the wordplay in there. It was good for a gangsta thing, but wouldnt stick out in front of other lyrics, you know what I mean? Just try and elevate on things, bring emotion to your flows... Aight hommie, you got the basics... Now rase your level up, aight hommie...


Return the favor and look at " Insecure " in my sig and tell me what you think about it. Aight hommie, it would be much appriciated...

Hit_Man 02-04-04 04:19 PM

^ it was jus a freestyle so i wasnt tryin to rap at a deeper lvl, but thx fo tha feedback anyways

uppin


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