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CV: Smoke wanted some to I guess.....
To be honest wit you ...
I dont' give a fuck who's crew it is I mention.... You hangin' on by a thread in lyricall suspention What happen dawg? you used to posses skills you die? The Diagnosis is Xtreme out of 2 losses ones from Eye! 5-0 if I remember correct ..even then u thought u were vet Give the material respect!..cuase ur still not even close yet! Keep your dawgs on'a leash...you might hafta relax your feet... Babysittin' these kids is better than them on a rack for meat! Step back take seat...my verse even makes your name weak... SmokaJoka complete...i'd resart ur life with 2 ctr+alt+deletes! You think you might be elevated .... maybe even elite at that....... Well when will u grow out of typin every other word with a Cap?! Indeed you need to regulate your crew ...you losin team control?... Installed security cameras & spent days at the screen console! I take a closer look ... I set out to merk you crew long ago ... The roster's booked ...I beat half of them the rest said "No" So much for those hoes ...this one though has lost his flow ... A diss on me showed...worth the read no, I felt free to go! I constrict your words like Boa's and give'em a pound of push Punches direct to the point while this fool raps around the bush! Back in the day though I used to really have respect for you... Now your whack so is your crew...your diss shows that is true! |
*ahem*...*cough*.....i beat Eye.....lmfao
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*ahem* nah...........maybe in the rematch.....recall....this is when you still used bold words and blah blah....thought Eye was newb and he ko'd you :)
and you wanted a rematch...might'a beat him then.... |
<<reason why smoka stopped bolding and quoting :)
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this was a really good spit, you had the flow down to a tea. the flow worked well through out the piece. 9/10 structure was also good and stayed constant without flaw 9/10 vocab was very good and i enjoyed reading the spit.9/10
well what more can i say a great piece. keep it up 9/10 fave line = Step back take seat...my verse even makes your name weak... SmokaJoka complete...i'd resart ur life with 2 ctr+alt+deletes it just stood out for me. COULD YA RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE FAIRLY ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG.THANKS |
uppin :thumbup:
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Hmm~~~word up Tech~as usual this was hott~~~good diss...hemm~~~but who's smoke???
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smokajoka is xtreme's Old name....guess you wouldn't kno...i just used to callin'em smoke.....
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Tech…
Had a nice diss kept flow threw out.. Ok structure and some cool punches.. I can see you coming hard and ish.. Overall a nice piece.. Oh and uhhh I am not whack… *skips* |
Yo dawg nice diss now why won't you set up our battle in frontlines.....see but the funny thing about this diss is that smoka beat you.....and would again much like you beat me twice......I would lose all the mulits kinda throws your flow off set it up in frontlines i'll show you what the iJL regulars can do................pz nice peice i give it a 6/10..............
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^ no he did not beat me....i ko'd him as eye4neye....he says specifically
"fuck you Meks, i thought this was a newb, i woulda came harder, i wanna rematch" this was also the exact same time when i called IJL out.....so get your Rb history straight for you say some shit....both of you...Token's a witness...he remembers!..upppp.....TUR...check ur Pm dawg.... peace |
no u never beat me whore....lmfao....get the link....u was DQed for voting for urself.....LMFAO!!!!
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^ didnt vote 4 myself
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I didn't see y'allz battle...but I'd rip both of you a neww asshole to get fucked in...I made the same mistake when I thought Smoka was a newb...but anywayz...this was hot...the flow was on point...although ya flow and rhyme scheme changed a bit since back when you was Meks and Eye...ya multiez ain't as abundant...ut ya structure'z improved a lot...
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