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Spittin
most of ya'll need to quit can't you see the signs/
my lines out WRAP ur rhymes crawl down ur back and break ur spine/ i'm dope like a dealer call me aka weapon concealer/ packin more than guns in my draws now tell me whose realer/ i can spit a rap/ flip it back/ make ur eyes spin all in the same trak/ tell me what i lack you'll say sumtin' dumb/ or maybe the truth but i shit u more than the runs/ i stay won (one) battle losses confuse me/ cuz' u can abuse me more than a church family/ my stamina remains to be at a high/ sigh in relief do it twice and u might die/ i don't lie, i can't, but i can cuss/ fuck, shit, ass, bitch so many dirty word's can give ya a head rush |
Yo, if you just get ya structure on que, you might have potential.. Its was a good lil quick read, think it went off a lil at the end, but good stuff.. Keep elevating, everyone is always elevating no matta what status they are..
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A dont like these type of OM...
They seem to me... That they dont belong in here... Its not what a would class as a OM... You need to work on your structure... Sort out your flow aswell... Also need to use a wider range of vocabulary... This wasnt very complex at all... Sort that out... Wasnt feelin this verse at all... As a said... Dont like self-glorification verses... Find them pointless... Played... Try a interesting topic... Pz |
Its str8 I liked it to a extent holla at me
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