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Kwizikz 02-04-04 08:41 AM

on the Northern Front- Kwiz N V B.I collabo.
 
On the Northern Front

Kwiz

The North Star shines bright...Ignites the sky with a Fire Torture
…Post apocalyptic Landscape…Raging In my war torn nature…
Its an empty Vessel of a Bottle, Containing the Secret to my facts
Painful Industrial Times…Painful like a million Thumbtacks
Looking back on the lock turning, while my eyes burn Scolders
Time passes; problematic existence…Personality’s bolder
…Chemical Rushes…Endorphin, or mere lack of the Substance…
…That brings happiness and Stops the long term Subsidence…
Bare Smack and Crack heads plague the streets of my Town
Like the Bubonic Plague…Bringing a death toll, Society breaks down
Drug Dealers Dealing on Corners…Children watch like Media Reporters
Don’t miss a single aspect…Then copy the behaviour in close quarters


On the Northern Front…Dark Times never fail to exist
Sometimes ignored by the Benefits of bliss
But We still exist…Living in the dark of Factory Smoke
Look at the Northern Star Fade…Losing hope

(B.I’z Verse)
Blind bastard Eye Lids..so how did it come to this?
Enigma of the Purest yet you fail to make Emphasis
the deepest Abyss..of a solemn chamber of thoughts
where feelings are hated N Distraught but not Caught
so I Bought a new Aura..jus that something thats Purer
where you can feel it yourself & decide nothing can be Surer
to the Core..a Cataract of Sights Enbedded into Cells
locked up N Abondoned far from Wishings in the Wells
Coasted by Bells..that sound you hear as Silence draws Near
is it the start of a new year or jus the Attractment of Fear
can you Hear? its like a Ringing yet we all still cant See
an Idol of Amazement that we still cant be sure if it can Be
Joy? Fun? Glee? thats nuttin that you can Dare compare to Me
its like the Sea w/ No Salt..its a Tax w/ No Fee
I mean it doesnt Exist so Resist & be a Pacefist
Eyes clog up like Mist..tried to Look but sumthing Missed


On the Northern Front…Dark Times never fail to exist
Sometimes ignored by the Benefits of bliss
But We still exist…Living in the dark of Factory Smoke
Look at the Northern Star Fade…Losing hope






Kwizikz 02-05-04 06:06 AM

uppin people

Timeless 02-05-04 06:13 AM

yea this is a nice peice, good flow, vocab, and structure. keep it up.

7/10

Kwizikz 02-05-04 06:40 AM

ta................................................ ......
need more feedbak...............................
Me N BI makin it an audio next week

Kwizikz 02-05-04 08:13 AM

fuckin ell.....................feed bak!


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