Quelude vs. Machavelli
 

16 lines
1 hour
blind spit
no b/s

Quelude can't really stop me/
he'd rather fuck around and get dropped see!//
don't come up with bullshit or get attacked/
from lyrical murder cause your friends thought you were wack/
im held back but about to let out my rage!/
mother fuckers like about to make me go insane!!//
you in pain from cause you didn't know who you were dealin with/
now your trapped and you know your body is mother fuckin feelin it/
your try to come back it'll just blow up in your face/
and i'll let you now win any battle just incase!//
i'll make myself drop MC's by the tons!/
you see my face you punk bicthes bout' to RUN!//
are you havin fun, i ain't done, this just bthe begginnin' for you/
you try to play the star when all the people just ignore you//
and when it's all said and done don't expect to get on top/
cause us mother fuckers make you still DROP!!//

Quelude im done you can go ahead and spit now so we can get this over with!

Fuck..I should of did my homework on you...YOU SUCK!
any way I set the thread so...

You trying to spit obviously's one of your weak spots
Like a white boy with thin lips.. trying to beat box..
You hot?...only because you need to roll down your kneesocks
Machavelli.. the lost shakur..his legal names ThreePac
I searched your post for a punch..all I found is a slap
Reality hit..this kid's bullshit!..got no strength on the track..
Your illiterate..plus ignorant..makes for a chicken scratch drop
Nothing but lines and dots ..slashes clash with asterisks STOP!
I'm waisting precious lines and time on your inferior mind
With that in mind..won't even rhyme...dude you really do suck..

what are you talkin about you suck star
t voting ya'll!

quelude that style was weak kid why did i even wste my time

Yea so in case your new to this site mach you just got what we here call merked....See he threw punches...at you....which are things that usually should be creative....and that should make fun of the other person....he also employed ...meta4's and even wordplay.....You just tryed to spit it gangsta and talk about how good you are....Its a battle you aren't supposed to tell everhyone how good you are you are suppose to punch at the other guy.....yOu really came with weak stuff and you vocab is elementary your prolly a youngin......and you really shouldn't talk shit unless yyou can back it up..............word..............vote........no contest.............que...............pz....Mach the whackness emergency center calls.

lol.....uppin this travesty of a battle...........

One sided battle...
Umm..Mach was just a verse that rhymed and sorta dissed him
You're attempts at punches were too simple
You had no wordplay...and ya flow switched up a lot

Que's was better..he had punches/wordplay
tha beatbox line was cool and tha threepac was a nice personal
ya flow was consistant..
so for an overall better verse

v/ Quelaude

hit this up with an honest vote please...thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111807

i cant vote but i gatta say.

threepac..lol..got merced..very bad..haha

he didn't even produce a verse worth reading..que killed'em with good personals, and punches..they were funny kid..

vote on this for me though..1 vote needed..knowledge -vs- dizzy hommel

thx
peace

Okay

Flow=Que, His verse just had a better all around flow to it. Mach, you need to work on your flow a bit.

Punches=Que, he actually threw some punches in there, and they were actually good. Mach, you need to focus on working on your punches, it's a big part of battling and you really didn't throw any.

Personals=Que, he put some personals in there, not as many as there could have been, but he put some in there. Mach, you need some work in this area as well, a few good personals go along way.

Vocab=Que, he had some good vocab. Mach, your voacab was basic, good vocab can really improve a verse.

Over all=Que, I like your drop, it had some good punches, personals, and vocab, I couldn't really see any obvious points of improvement so just keep dropping and elevating.
Mach, you need to work on your punches, personals, and vocab, if you get better at all three of these areas you could improve a great deal. Your flow was your best area and flow isn't going to win a battle unless it was a really close battle which this was not.

Vote=Que

Hit up my battle, with honest votes. Thanks, and here's the link.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

Quelude with the evil merk...

Mach, like Que said, really didn't even hit his opponent.

He chose instead, to talk about himself, how Que had him going insane, threats, this, that, but no real insults.

But Que hit personally and won this with the first bar.
Everything else was just injury to tha insult...
Ended up killin tha poor kid.
Actual wordplay, personals, and punches by Quelude.

No contest, only the rules made me explain my vote...

Cuz the win for Que stood out like Em's green cap with tha orange bill.

Holla back...Place ya vote right here!

V/ Que lmao the beatboxline killed him, lol that actually made me laugh..
other cat elevate punches didnt connect, .. didnd fell much of your lines, .. Que nice verse...Pz.