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Sharades
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fgee lunatic xey Take a look, its in a book; A tight hook that makes you wana walk da plank/ this be the boat that never sank into the oceans depths, mysterious guess/ Don't know if life will go on after this nest, da hell wit rappers wearing vests/ fashionably loud, i detest as i manifest my destiny to uplift hip hop supremacy don't flow to get known, just do it all alone in da comfort of my own home./ see, yall just don't know how da S.C rolls, day by day escaping gun sharades/ And i aint no gangsta, just young cat riding high for da laughter & da babes/ time to go cuz the library time is up in these cold days/ |
iight...
Needs some work... Wasnt feelin the topic... Or the way it was portrayed... You need to improve your vocabulary... Get more complex ideas and concepts flowing through your writing... Not a bad drop... But a dont ever like self-glorification OM pieces... Very rare that a do... Need to elevate... Pz... |
wtf r u all on about
wiv dis goin on i mite aswell go sleep on the couch i thought the idea was to battle not to think up stupid questions untill ur brains rattle u wanna battle me n try n even get close ill make u mopre embarrased than if u were wearin no clothes |
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