hardhittter vs BrainStorm
 

ok 10 - 20 lines due with in 30 mins after check in u spit 1st
no crew
no hate
no dick riding and no D/R votes
3-0 knock out wins or first ta 5...........
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checin in .................................................. ........

okkkkkkkk this kidd is 32 mins over time limit but ill let it go sence he's a neWB..................hurry up tho..............*1*

here is my very first spit but like all the others ive bit this ones gonna b a hit// yah im talkin but hardhitter better b good//cuz i deal wit u premachure spitters like a lumberman chops wood//u must
b that nigga that likes to get wet cuz im gonna spread ya wak rap all ova the net//
im not one of those niggas who would beet an infint but hardhitters whineing is realy diffrent//mayb this kid be like the roots an start a band his preschool whinning makes me wanna hang him ova the railing with one hand//hes gonna b left behind theft his way he cant find//todays just enother day hitter im just on the daily grind//ugot somethin but ur barlee shined//

WoW..........OK u have got to be kidding me son...
it took this fag 1 hour and 8 mins ta lay out none.....
u get played out son ive won!
no need to even try here........
2 lines have this kid stumped for a fuckin year/
jump for a pear im senceing ya fear.your just a local no name queer!....
and your just like every rapper this year.
ni**a this and ni**a that.....
u will get demolished when hardhitter is up ta bat!...
dont know who hes callin a infit when this fag was born a deformd bizkit/
i have just missed it?"(his verse didnt have shit on me)"
you've lacked every requirment so kiss shit..
go fuck y aboy NORM!.....
this kids real good with dicks why fuck eles would they call u brain storm...............

ightt uppin on these votes.....leave a thread and ill hit it up and return the favor....................uppin #1

ight upin for some votes !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

lmao..yall no who got dis battle...hardhitter won..n u lil newb stop tryin..hitter had betta shit dan u wit 2lines nigga

- :nono: S0ySaUCe

hahahahha no doubt thats 4 suer........thanx..............ightt uppin fo them vote leave a link and ill return the favor..........uppin #2

alais thats easy to c if not dick ride!! :laugh2:

we need some ligit votes uppin#1..........................................

Brain - your verse was really hard to read....your structure was horrible and i couldnt tell where they line ended and started..break your verse down like HH did....you had no good punches really...i couldnt catch ya flow, and i didnt see any metas or wordplay...no personals either, just 1 tiny personal that failed. try to work on ya punches and struct..get the base of those down then u can add in metas wordplay and personals.

hard - your verse wasnt much better then brains...your structure was just ok and your flow was very choppy..your lines never stayed the same length...your punches were basic and played..and alot of them didnt hit...the rhyme scheme wasnt good, you rhymed the same sound alot... wordplay...i saw alittle of it and personals...well those were poor...but u did take this battle

V/ Hard...he actually threw acouple ok punches and had some wordplay

ightt thanx...........uppin for them votes come on yall leave a link and i willreturn the favor..........thanx uppin#3

ill take it
yah im not great right now that was my wakest

hahah i wasnt even trying kidd i wanted to give u a chance u want a re match after this one closes and ill spit my better halfe??......................LMAO omg u think i was trying?