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killaconcepz v.s dazasta
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no crewvotes,etc and state y u voted for ? cuz i'm gettin' sick of losin' off of bullshit and hate |
checkin' in and bout to spit
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no more takin' it eazy
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no need to check in-cuz i'm cashin' a win-sick of wack rap so don't know why i'm battlin' him
took it eazy cuz i thought no one can handle me-but it's time to find out that i'm off da wall like a fallin' mantlepiece destroyin' challengers who be takin' me light-spitten so much acid dat the only real challenger is a shookin' up sprite bout' to get plastard kid-cuz rap i mastered it-c'mon even u admitted that ya flow is dazastarous ready to attack so i dare u to test me-cuz i be flowin' so sick i got aids scared to catch me u bout as half ass as a fraction-probably relaxin'-but afta u here dis' u'll most likely be missin' in action u not earnin' a win-cuz i'll leave u in da dark like a den-this battle is almost more one sided than a bowlin' ball weighed in next to a pen so before u call me wack just get it right-cuz u could'nt beat me if i turned into you dick for the night |
oh boy..why so wack....what a waste fo my life..check in and verse...
with hatred in eyes i burn...battle this kid?..im afraid... and yes he killed concepz...after he left them played... his text is gay...i can tell your ur fate.... ...but why bother?...just one word for you...L-E-VATE!.. my text could spell this hate...think i was born with it... ..your mom made a mistake...and you were born in it... i mourn and shit...for newbs with no direction.. and your name is derived from..how you shoulda been killed in conception.... maybe its neglection....people dont vote on your battles... ..yet you challenged me...and got slaughetered like cattle.. prattle..on and on..yes^^that was weak but killer... fact of the matter is..i could just beat with filler... what i speak is real-er...than anything you could think of... and ur flows will be washed away..like dirt in the sink cuz... ..such a herb..keyed...vote now |
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VOTE: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112033 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112144 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111538 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111536 :cussing: :shoot: :banghead: :gfy: |
uppin 1
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let's go
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............uppin 1..............vote people......
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Here's how I see it.
Flow=Daz, his flow made it much easier to read. Killa, your shit was really hard to follow, work on your flow and it'll make it a better verse. Punches=Daz, he threw more punches that hit a bit harder. Killa it seemed like you did more self propin then punching at Daz. Personals=Daz, he had some okay personals in his piece. Killa, once again it seemed like you did more propin of yourself then spittin at Daz. Vocab=Daz, he had some good vocab in there. Killa your vocab was kind of basic. Over all=Daz, this was an okay drop, it could have been better though, you came with some punches and some personals but they didn't hit as hard as they could have, you had some okay vocab but it could be better as well, and your flow is okay, but there is still room for improvement there, just keep working at it and you'll get there. Killa, you lost this battle in large part because of your flow, it was all kinds of messed up, you should work on it, I think it would really help out your drop, you need to work on directing punches at the person your battling as well, you kind of mostly did self props which isn't going to get you a win, and you need to work on your personals, personals can win you a battle, your vocab wasn't horrible, it was just basic, I know I have that problem as well so don't feel bad about it, it takes awhile to get to where you can really put some good vocab in and make it work, just keep working at it and you should get there. Vote=Daz |
I forgot to ask for votes. Here are the links to my battles, thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625 |
I dont Know Both of yall ama Break this Down In Catagory.
Punches: Daz Personals: Daz Creative: Daz Structure:Daz Overal Vote: Daz Return Fav: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111683&page=2 (Vote Honest...Thnx) Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token |
umm.................thx for the votes.........more votes required!
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punches-d style-tie wordplay-killa creativity-tie personals-d overall-d Not a bad battle. killa u had an ok flow except some of your lines were kinda stretched, the punches were aight, u didn't have any good personals though. Also seemed like allot of dissin and braggin sway from that and concentrate on your opponent more. dazazta u had na aight flow, sum ok punches, and personals..more personals though, lil more witty and advanced then killa..vote-dazazta fav lines killa- Quote:
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pzz vote on my battles if their still open thanx |
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