My first flow
 

(Please bear in mind I have a London accent)
Dedicated to all the young mothers who understand where Im coming from!
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Yeah yo,
I came here on pure faith
But on MY mothers disgrace
See shed be all up In my face
If she saw me in this place
But its all good
And mammas gonna go wild
‘cause the sitters at home and she’s minding my child

well its been a busy week
and although Im lackin’ sleep
this party vibe calls
so out this mamma crawls
‘cause although I love my baby boo
I also love my freedom too

Its time I got a break
Tonight Im’a stay out late
Please don’t start a debate
Don’t come be bringing hate
My child’s safe in bed
Oh my little sleepy head
As I left the words I said…

Breath
See ya tomorrow boo
I read him a story too
Now he’s a sleep till the morning new
I said he’s gonna sleep the WHOLE night though
My little babsy babby boo
Goo goo

One smile lights up my heart one “mamma”
His word a piece of Art
his face my day it starts and
it ends
an extension of me
my trusted friend a love that never ever ends

but back to me
tonight you see
a P>A>R>T>Y party
a chance to dance
my stress behind
clear my head
my thoughts refined

but when I return I trust I see My baby boo
A lust in me
Lust
A love
You want all the time
Did I really have to define that
in my rhyme
but for all the people who don’t think like me
Ill let you in tonight into my clarity
I understand my thoughts stay free
Guess its all just part of being me

And its not so bad
Breath
SEE HIS SMILE MAKES UP FOR THAT STRESS I HAVE
And leaves my brain the mess not bad
To figure out
As I catch this break
Just make sure Im not back too late

I wont drink too much cause a hangover ain’t good
I wouldn’t be able to handle babby like I should

So to all my friends stay strong for me
Realise my times on priority
My babby first
then maybe me
I still love you all
And you should see this all makes sense when you’re a young
Mum like me!

Guess theirs no other mummas mc-ing out there?

This was alright i thought.....the meaning was there.....had emotion in it....it seemed to flow ok for the most part i think, some parts it lost the flow of things.....it seemed simple though try making it more complex....but overall it was alright...keep at it.

ha ha ha you are funny man. I lived in ireland for a year and is dangerous as shit especially in july. all the flags and marches and automatic pistols and ski masks. Ireland is a war zone. Cops die and nothing happens to the killers. You live in a dangerous place so I give you credit.RAP ABOUT THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!