LyriCali Girfted -Vs- .iLL.
 

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-No d/r, biting, feeding, crew/hate votes-
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-Bring ya 'A' game-

Peace ~

c-h-e-c-k-i-n innnnnn!!!

yo why you offline man? hope u dont dog out on this!! ima wait for your post!!!!! hurry

Yo..

Ima bout to rip your bitten shit, embarass this flippin twit//
Bust out the medical kit, disect shit that doesnt fit/

Im tryin not use complicated words, or mix in manipulative verbs/
you like a congregation of herbs, smoke ya alone so i avoid germs/

Just watch as i k.iLL. at w.iLL. this fake by spitting .iLL. verses/
Im st.iLL. force-feeding him the p.iLL., better checkup wit the nurses/

Merk this newb so many ways, just call me the 'Master of Disguise'/
"Dont ever fuck wit me again" -- just a 'word to the wise'/

My spits are like 'death row', better choose your 'last meal'/
But you've chose me, so face the consequences of the deal/

This aint ya typical closer, the ones you see by other posters/
I put you're mind in a reel, just call me the 'roller coaster'/


1 hr till reply starting now!! good luck man!

*cough* easy win... hahaha j/p dogg..

-\Opener/-
I Cant Believe I'm Hearin This Bitch Spit/
From a Criminalistic Dipshit Smearin His Lipstick/
All Over His Boyfriends Dipstick on a Congical Visit!/

-\Dog Fight Begins/-
My .iLL.-Matic and All Tactic 'Weapons of Mass Destructions' Rap Packet/
Is Too Over-Static For a Fanatic Whos Known To Be RB's Fagget/

This Nigga Must've Given Head To His B/F In His Bed/
And Came Out All 'Woozy', Cuz He Misspelled His Own Name In the Thread!/ (look at the title, lol)

Ya Better Feel This Cuz I'm the Illest, I Rip Emcees and Feast On Verses/
A Beast That Converses Lyrically As My Flow Disperses the Curses/

I'd Dare Ya To Breath, But You Cant Because You're Breathless/
I'm Wreckless, My Flow Is Infectious, It'll Eat You For Breakfast/

-\Better End It../-
Ya Lack-the-Force To Swing Back-an-Forth when Swordz Retract-ya-Chords/
And I Laugh-of-Course As You Get Bagged-and-Torched/
Too My Biggest Fan, Here, Let Me Autograph-ya-Corpse!!/
*signed, .iLL.* :laugh:


Yo! don't sleep on this please...get some votes up in here...drop an honest vote, get an honest vote back..pe@ce

Uppin, please vote

Can we please get some votes? Pretty please? With cherries on top?

DUUUUUDEEEEE ... where the votes!!! damn! i thought RB was tight as fuck guys! commonnnnnnn

V to the O to the T to the E pleeeeeeease!!

okay, lyrical you had an ok flow, but the punches needed work, they weren't hittin too good, structure wa fine. ILL you had an ok flow too, sum beter punches, u used more personals, but really didn't have anythin to eye shattering, much better wordplay though..lyrical if u uses sum more personals you wulda had this. and on that note..vote-ILL

yo it was a good battle but ill gets my vote on this one. Lyrical, you had a good flow but you didnt have any hard hittin puches, and ur personal didnt hit. Ill yours also has a nice flow and you had some punches and u used more personals.
keep it up both of u. pz

vote ill

return da favour plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112522

openers- lyricali had an ok start but the second line got choppy, too many sylables
ill.'s starter had me rollin', it also read nicely.

wordplay- niether really had any

vocab-ill. was off and on with his use of big words, but it worked well in his verse.
lyricali's verse was a little more complex, and consistent with his word usage.

punches-lyricali had three punches by my count..and two of those were weak,and/or played.
ill. overwhelmed lyricali with his punches.

personals-ill. was the only one that had andy,,but the one he did have was a good one.

structure-lyricali was the only one that had equal bars....

closers-lyricali had a "typical closer" is was a funny but it didn't hit real hard.
ill..had a nice closer, although the shole autograph your corpse thing has been done to death..ha..it hit real; hard..


VOTE-ill.

now that I voted on that

ya'll can come vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366

vote plzzzzzz only 3 more till KO!!! 3!!



PLEASE VOTE FAIR, I'LL VOTE FAIR FOR YOURS!!

Upp-in This Mutha Fucka !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!