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Dope Name 02-04-04 09:13 PM

Dope Name -|vs|- SDIZZLE
 
you know the rules

check in and you have 20-25 minutes

10-12 lines

you spit first

sdizzle 02-04-04 09:38 PM

check

sdizzle 02-04-04 09:42 PM

im the best of the best, ur the worst of the worst
ur the biggest flop sense the gift and the curse
i dont mean to rain on ur parade, but are u insane
if u were smoking weed, u still wouldn't have a dope name
dog im just getting started, ima bout to go fast
cuz this dudes more feminine than baby bash
my rhymes are contageous, and u got a rash
im rapeing u more than model with dame dash
im not laughing, look at my face, do i look symithetic
ur so slow, u couldn't win a bronze medal at the special olypic
get it, i didn't think so, ur lyrically challenged
cuz ur sucky rhymes minus ur flow = a horrible balance

Dope Name 02-04-04 11:16 PM

okay, this is my check in, if you're wondering what took me so long, i was talking to my dad on our house phone, and this is the last time for me to talk to my dad before he goes to trial tomorrow, so sorry for the wait

it'll be down 20-25 minutes

Dope Name 02-04-04 11:35 PM

We come to watch this kid get torn apart from limb to limb
Look at him, lookin' tough while he still can't open a slim jim
Crackin' this over your head, and you're better off playin dead
While his rhyme tickles me pink, I take him and beat him red
Shiver, shutter, mumble, studder, let him make his little utter
Of a verse that goes good with sundays, bread, and butter
While you try to scream at me I'll take you out like an assassin
Your verse was horrible, i ate it and now i wanna go fastin'
Bow down to the king and lets get this down and you can lose
You're an kid with no skills, like watchin Lebron without shoes
You don't have anything to the point, it all comes in squiggles
So now that we know this i just need to say, that's Fizzle

done

Dope Name 02-05-04 11:03 AM

Uppin (1)

Dope Name 02-05-04 02:41 PM

Uppin (2)

Dope Name 02-05-04 07:39 PM

Uppin (3)

sdizzle 02-05-04 11:01 PM

bump

sdizzle 02-06-04 04:58 PM

bump

sdizzle 02-06-04 08:45 PM

yup im just uppin this shit up

Dope Name 02-07-04 02:40 PM

Uppin (4)

Dope Name 02-07-04 09:46 PM

Uppin (final), this is ridiculous, me and Dizzle are the only ones that've posted in this battle so i would appreciate some votes...

Lawyer 02-07-04 11:36 PM

close battle..i dont like how nobody votes

anyway

dope name- your verse was alright....some of the lines were
good some were just sorry imo...
but, your last like 6 lines i think were really good..they were cool punches

sdizzle...your verse was solid as well..bu tnot as good as doope names
the last line and the dope name line were the best
but u didint come as consistent with the cool punchlines..

so winner is dope name..

i cant vote cuz i dotn have 100 but can u please vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112445

Da_Killa_Kid 02-08-04 12:23 AM

Well the only verse that sdizzle had that was halfway decent was his closing verse. My vote goes to dope name because he had the better flow, punches, and the line about the bread and butter had a nice touch to it. Sdizzle your verse was alright but your punches weren't hard enough. its like you tried way too hard and came up empty handed. Your structure was pretty even, but Dope name came with more fire in his punches.

VOTE_DOPE NAME


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