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WhiteGangsta443 02-04-04 10:34 PM

Gangsta Test; Im the Best
 
Do you think your a gangsta; Cause you probably a fukin wanksta;
You problay got a small D.I.C.K.; The size of a uza (uzi);
Mine is huge; Its way bigga then a damn A.K.;
Im a Gangsta in disguise; When I pop out and surpise;
All your little wanksta's;
So they run the hell away; Wit out a fukin Say;
I start to chase your gang; then you hear BANG;
All I saw; was your people startin to fall;
Then I smell; the scent of hell after u fell;
You try to get up; but you can't even say "sup";
I just left you to die; an All I said was Bye.

:shoot: :help:

TiLLEyEDiE 02-04-04 10:41 PM

holy shit... u need to elevate..
no hate,, wouldn't want a white guy at my house
.. listen.. read a dictionary
your vocab sucks.. and
well your shit was a good topic but ur rhymes were just weak
like
i sat, on this mat
its BORING
neways good drop
for a newb


E-L-E-V-A-T-E

rule 02-04-04 10:43 PM

^^what he said...and try and get a better structure...re-read your stuff...it might help you a lot...but keep at it peace

Penskills 02-04-04 10:47 PM

wow...this....was...pure....shit.....now die....

JamesJr. 02-05-04 08:48 AM

what were you thinking with the name??
 
Needs better rhymes (multies)
longer lines,
more flow
better voacb

and YEAH
ELEVATE

JamesJr.


Damn no wonder they think white people are wack

halfrican 02-05-04 08:52 AM

lmfao, this verse must be a joke, cause if this is serious you might wanna consider a new hobby


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