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Gangsta Test; Im the Best
Do you think your a gangsta; Cause you probably a fukin wanksta;
You problay got a small D.I.C.K.; The size of a uza (uzi); Mine is huge; Its way bigga then a damn A.K.; Im a Gangsta in disguise; When I pop out and surpise; All your little wanksta's; So they run the hell away; Wit out a fukin Say; I start to chase your gang; then you hear BANG; All I saw; was your people startin to fall; Then I smell; the scent of hell after u fell; You try to get up; but you can't even say "sup"; I just left you to die; an All I said was Bye. :shoot: :help: |
holy shit... u need to elevate..
no hate,, wouldn't want a white guy at my house .. listen.. read a dictionary your vocab sucks.. and well your shit was a good topic but ur rhymes were just weak like i sat, on this mat its BORING neways good drop for a newb E-L-E-V-A-T-E |
^^what he said...and try and get a better structure...re-read your stuff...it might help you a lot...but keep at it peace
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wow...this....was...pure....shit.....now die....
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what were you thinking with the name??
Needs better rhymes (multies)
longer lines, more flow better voacb and YEAH ELEVATE JamesJr. Damn no wonder they think white people are wack |
lmfao, this verse must be a joke, cause if this is serious you might wanna consider a new hobby
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