Timeless vs Guesswhoesback
 

10-12 lines
no hate votes etc..
blind spits

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In...Here is my verse:

I'm defined as the lyrical mind, bringin mirical lines/
While you what? Waiting for luck to give ya a boost up?/

Your flow is tight, like the dress you're wearin'/
When ya speak on the mic, It can't stand the words he's hearin'/

I don't care If ya words are filthy, Ima still Kill thee/
My words make ya feel guilty[That he sucks]Admit it, I'm ill,G/

Bitch you prolly will attack with useless tactics in ya crap-spit/
I ain't in the Matrix still i'll do a back-flip till I dodge ya whack, attack-shit/

Bitch I was ready to kill ya when you were born in ya momma womb/
As soon as you slipped out her pussy I greeted ya with doom/
Apart from burying her cord I buried you too in the tomb/

Put this kid down for his nap. Administer 'drugs' with adult-force
Now he's got so many 'holes in his body' he could open a-'golf-course'
You always wished you'd get big, GRANTED! Here's a fat filled sandwich.
Cause with rhymes that 'flow' THAT 'slow', you'll NEVER reach an 'experts bandwidth'
dog your text and flow also be shit, i have the skillz you lack
you aint hot, and even ronald Mc donald knows ya aint a big mac
I'ma do this shit Passive because you left ya self open to get ya Ass Kicked...
Cuz VNE came from UR ANUS so we always knew you dropped Whack Shit
Time relapse from my precise rapz just to back-stab these ex-com-rad's
GWB's The kinda emcee who would pull out his DICK in hand to hand combat
there its over and another wanabie, newbie, packed and smacked
so one more line for ya lil bitch,when you logg off guesswho'wontbe' back

(sorry it took so long, i had writers block, thats why its so shit)

uppin............................................. .....

Hey, I'm a newb but just to start I'll challenge you both!

Not bad by the way you both were aieght.

Nice............Guesswhosback your flow was way basic not bad but the punches werent there.....Timless your verse had some nice wordplay an flow was all there....very nice.......

there its over and another wanabie, newbie, packed and smacked
so one more line for ya lil bitch,when you logg off guesswho'wontbe' back<-- Nice finisher!

Good Job!

Vote Timeless

WOW we got a newb that is pretty good.....timeless nice flow u had good punches and i was feelin that ending.............the break down........
flow:timLess had a good flow fell off track acouple of time byt he fixed it...guess whos back yo u had no good flow u need to find words ta flow with other words better....
punches:TIME u had some nice punches<Guesswhosback u had a couple of good punches but TIME came thru harder with his,u need to elevate just alittle bit
structuer:well guess whos back had good structuer<TIME your was ightt but his was just a little better
PERSONALS:didnt realy see any good personals...
my vote:timeless

uppin more........................................

This was a pretty gud battle
flow: they both had a nice flow going on but Timeless had more gud rhymes going on than guess cuz I felt he had some gud wordplay
Timeless had really gud punches I didn't really saw gud punches in guess but guess had a nice structure....need to elevateee...
Personals i didn't see any so they both have to ùake work to make sum gud personals
After all i must say that both need to elevate but my vote goes to Timeless

Vote on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593

uppin for 1 more vote..............................

Shit Timeline I underestimated ya, I guess that adds one more to your wins.

Punches: Timeless, better overall punches, not great punches from Guess. The golf course line was a decent punch
Wordplay: Timeless, the big mac line was the best wordplay in this battle. No wordplay from Guess.
Multis: Guess, guess's verse was mainly multis, a lot better flow than Timeless.
Personals: Neither, no personals from either
Opener: Timeless, opened with a decent punch, Guess didn't open with anything respectable.
Closer: Neither, both were ultra wack, Guess's didn't make sense, said something about coming out of his mom's womb, and Timeless's was the least creactive personal you could've come up with.

Vote - Timeless

Make creative punches, elevate both.

Time relapse from my precise rapz just to back-stab these ex-com-rad's
GWB's The kinda emcee who would pull out his DICK in hand to hand combat
Timeless's best bar.

I'm defined as the lyrical mind, bringin mirical lines/
While you what? Waiting for luck to give ya a boost up?/
Guess's best bar.