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equilibrium - kwizikz
was a topical battle verse...
Equilibrium…………
I need to be balanced…Grab a hold of the mind state Alcohol produces equilibrium…Brings me to the end of Fate Cos my brain’s Apocalyptic…War torn by domestic feuds Need to find salvation…N My troubles ain’t new news Seek Happiness in My Guinness…Drink it til the Bottom Endless Abyss of Alcohol covers my soul, Drowning in My Sanctum Thought it would bring Happiness, Just a black pit of sorrow Uncertainness in my life concerning Future Tomorrows See the crows flying over head…A bird of prey hunting in 6th sense Kind of like me…But I’m hunting for Bleak Deliverance Trying to pay dividends…But can’t afford these Luxuries Me in a pessimistic state…N my children looking up to me? They see the troubles I endure…They think this is the Norm Looking at their war torn father…Pissed up N scorned So You see when My bloods Full of Toxins, I feel more safe Instead of being uneasy, unethical and displaced Equilibrium………….. thought it was aiight myself....lol... |
this is better good vocab and flow, structure was also good. not a bad piece but room for improvement
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I think its good for a topical battle I did in 5 minutes
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