IllConceptz vs. John
 

10 - 12 lines
no crew votes, no feedin/recyclin/bitin

no bullshit

good luck johnny.

checkin in........................................

illconceptz...... riggghhhhttt.........

my rhymes like bullets from my tech hittin you at all angles/
i'm like iverson to a rookie and breakin both of your ankles/2
ur redemption to this battle is some we can't mention/
cuz' if u respond weakly then ur gonna draw attention/4
how can u remain alive if my bullets got u flinching/
ur startled to death and i ain't even began the lynchin/6
my gun start poppin like popcorn put in a microwave/
even if u wave the white flag ur still gonna get sprayed/8
blood on ur clothes got u wishin you were still thinkin/
my slugs penetrated u so quick u thought u were still blinkin/10
ur dead this is over and i'm takin your corpse/
leave you hangin by fishin' wire right there on ur mothers porch/12

This isnt a challenge, at most Im battlin an intelligent-herb,
It could be an oxy moron, or a mixture of irrelevent-words,
This kid thinks he's 'bright' cause his mom calls him-her-'son', (sun)
Only an idiot would believe that, cause hes a 'dim'-person,
Claims he's 'straight' when he was caught by his mother humpin-boys,
He likes people who ride dick, it makes him 'bigger' like pumpin-roids,
Maybe he was once good, but like 2pac your fucking skill-died,
Why would you start on the net, if your inna crew wit hillside,
This is a battle, cant say youll win the war cause youll be dead-first,
Jacksonville bro? You as much a rapper as that fagget Fred Durst,
Your career isnt in rappin, so go to college and find respectable-trades,
Your lyrics are gay, like two men purpously getting infected wit aids,

Uppin #1..........................................

hey john wat bout r battle its all set up waiting for you to spit first

Hes allowed to be in two battle numb nutz... So dont freepost in my fuckin thread...

Uppin# 2....

Uppin # 3.........................................

Uppin #4..........................................

Illconceptz had it won half way through his verse. John you had a pretty good verse, pretty good punches, and flow but ill came alot harder than you. Ill you had better personals and your wordplay was way better. Both could elevate in the multis but other than that ill had em.

VOTE_ILLCONCEPTZ
Open Battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112317

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Both of yall hit hard, but to elevated would be to lyrically assassinate a nigga, and I'wn think yall can do that, yall aint showed me. But over all the personals were there, the metaphors was strong. VOTE= TIE, DRAW.

Return the favor, go and vote.

Uppin #5..........................................