Mentalist vs Da Killa Kid
 

aight 10 bar min
no bitin
no dick ridin
no freepost
20 bar max post by friday 9 pm
checkin by thursday 9 pm

Check in . ill spit by then.............................................. .................................................. .........

1 Yall crazy if touch the kid
2 Cuz the boi break ya neck like busta did
3 the kids rhyme is just so fluent
4 and u like ashanti tryin to sing just "foolish"
5 i kno u lost brain all twisted and bruised
6 need a punchline here's one u cant lose
7 dis kid here a ofcourse a real killer
8 but he turnin pailer then michael jackson after thriller
9 three two one nigga run im already the winner :gfy:
10 here take the board u might get hot from my embers

i jus needed to edit mine cuz the first line was missing some words but this verse i put them in no real difference

now if the mentalist is rippin this up the kid'll go home,
cause his rappins superior maybe i should leave him alone,
fuck that shit, this niggaz wack i'ld shit on all his lyrics,
why make him betta it's already so easy to win this,
end the mentalist's spirit, my lyrics are takin his life,
his shit's like dogs wit no teeth, all bark no bite
you blow and wonda why nobody on here's fellin ya,
cause everybody's lyrics getting in ya ass like enemas,
im done wit this nigga give em back to the W.E.C.
and when ya get there ask em why you suck beyond belief.

Aubree this you?...chuz if it is you wack cuz....killa kid obviously takes this in everything punches vocab metaphors the whole nine yards..and stop numbering your bars...its herbish as hell..look at killa's structure and learn and go to Wackness Emergency and study up...

v/killa

Uppin this shit ppl
uppin

Killa took this with the better punches, or else i feel this battle was pretty much a tie, kid also had a better flow, but if mentalist came harder on the punches he could of been able to take this, kid's verse had a feel like he wasn't even trying, and that also added to it...

Vote-Killa

this battle was lopsided...

mentalist-u had some weak punches along wit a horrible structure.....get rid of the numbers before your lines...that is whack....and try to be more creative wit ya punches

da killla kid-i didnt feel u came hard in this battle but then again u didnt need to...u had harder punches and more creativity in your verse and u had a lot better structure...that is why u took this battle

v/da killa kid

Mentalist had a really bad flow dat wasn't good at all and where were da punches at on dis battle to say da least for mentalist's side? Mentalist had no punches but were poor attempts at throwing them at killa kid if you ask me. Killa kid wiped mentalist clean with his punches and metaphors dat played along with his wordplay in his verse which was pretty good. Da best line to me was da enema part shit made me laugh hard at mentalist's ass. Kid killa has came down on foes much doper than dis but still he was to good and skilled to be beaten by mentalist.

Vote= Killa Kid

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112785
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414

uppin thsi thi ppl. dont sleep on it.

uppin for votes

Kidd took this one...better punches and structure...flow was pretty much the same but mentalist had almost zero punches...keep at it guys
vote-Da Killa Kidd
peep my baatles and drop an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112839
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112928

uppin number 4
get ya votes in

last up yall stop sleeping and vote.