im new to this
 

just started doing this so any critique is a good one so let me knwo where im lacking


just a quic freestyle


ayo im new in here so the real niggas come show me love/
and the flow is full of pnches you think i was typing with a glove/
where im from niggas are know to kill over nothing/
shit i spit be pha real you just be fronttin/(get it)
some cats might think this niggas here rep the dirty south/
cuz the shit that i spit is priceless like i got gold in my mouth/
and nowadays niggas dont scrap they fight with the heater/
put them metals things in you like a parking meter/
and me jsut formo the way i flow you can tell im form the slums/
niggas know you from the streets cuz you cats is bums/
look in the dictonary youd be da defenition of a hater/
strap a bomb to youre hip make it beep like a fucking pager