Angles circle us
 

In life, through the good and bad we are never alone for

From the worst decision 2 the ones that show to be ingenius

Through the times we thought we wouldn't make it to the next day

To the times we go to sleep early just to see the sun rise

Now one thing is for certain for as long as we have a soul

Yet is it because of these Angels our uprise or Demise?

nice little piece here
simplistic with a quick glance, but intriguing with an in-depth read and an attempt to understand, i've read plenty of pieces like this, but it still made me think
no complaints, nice drop
^keepin it short

really nice enjoyed how every verse had the same ending
simplistic but big in heart
it's like an everyday thing i really question myself of those things



keep posting

it was a simple put poem, with good thoughts, and thoughts shown well. the topic wasnt dragged out, and i thought the lenght was good, for repeating poems can get really boring it they are longer. it flowed well, but sounded really goo like a slow spoken piece, structure was good and vocab was basic. i thought the content was well written and wasnt choppy. nice work.

~Tera~
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