Raindrops...
 

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Raindrops...
*Got bored in class today...Just writing about my life...Dis one is out to ma gurl Flex...It's time to wake up ma*


Callin me late nights, standin in puddles
cryin...thought your world was goin to crumble
You were lost, told me your life was vain
said "i dont need a doctor...death relieves pain"
world was shook...you were crushed by recent drama
from the death of your gramps to the leavin of ur moma
but I told ya bear wit it, stay strong, and pull thru
your too young to be taken, God ain't ready for you
Your pretty, your smart, you get hit on a lot
Ur world seems so bright, so why ya thoughts so dark
I tried to help you get thru, what you were doin
was takin all the facts and contradictin ya choosins
You weren't ruined, more like perfect, just didnt understand
thought you were magnetic cuz u repelled against man
Hard niggaz don't cry, but one could from ur talks
to think..."her talent wasted"...worth our rain drops


Now I ain't a fan of caring, that isn't my trend
but with you...I discovered the tru power of friends
And thats why it hurt to hear your thoughts some days
plannin suicidal tactics in every single way
Gettin stress from your man, he was a worthless nigga
Killin ya insides more than sum hard liquor
Told ya leave but you said its you that he loves
yea...and Michael was only givin them kids hugs
Then you started doin drugs, drinkin henn, poppin ex
at the age of 15...already havin sex
makin males erect, and its really such a shame
since none of em fellas would remember ya name
you'd never take the blame, couldn't look at yaself
relieved ya conscience by pointin at everyone else
I should of gone crazy on ya, swingin mad with fists
because for once...then reality might of hit

upin

This was nice. The story was pretty decent. It was an easy read. Flowed nice. I liked the first verse alot better than the second. The secon was still decent though.

you get hit on a lot
For some reason i started laughing as soon as i read this :)

I discovered the tru power of friends
This also made me laugh. Just seems like something that purple dinosour would say :)

Anyway, nice piece.
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