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Wise Ways 02-06-04 03:24 AM

....17....
 
hmm...now i can see rated R movies...lol

Yo..
I'm spitting 17 lines..with probably about 17 rhymes..
Wise Combines fractions with tha power of 17 minds..
& divides primes without calculaters or pencil signs..
Battle slut..merk ya 17 times & every way imaginable..
Dismantle ya..blow u to pieces like i blow my candles..
Walking with sandles 17 centuries ago thru sand & snow..
Painting 17 pics..with contrasts from bland to Van Goe..
& no man knows my techniques are past 16 thats sweet..
17 times betta than u bitch..my standards u'll never meet..
Repeat it..I'll delete ya life..find ya soul & sacrifice it..
17 steps above u with skills..muthafucka I'm priceless!
I'm nice..not talking courtesy..rippin on my 17th birthday..
& I'll really disappoint u..if u think ya gonna hurt ways..
Tearing up bitches who be playing volleyball & soccer..
Peep Freemans pic..Ripped him up off 17 shots of vodka..


holds tha empty bottle upside down.....*all gone*

Dev 02-06-04 03:47 AM

interesting topic.... dunno whether it was very good, or not very good.... its one of the two.... im gonna go with good.... you had some nice wordplay in it... and it was different.... is it your birthday like..lol....... but no.. decent read i think.....

Wise Ways 02-06-04 03:54 AM

lol...yea..wasn't it obvious?
Look at tha title...then read tha
Last line..that'll prolly explain most of it....lol
Thanks

Lethargic 02-06-04 03:57 AM

My Feedback -

Happy Birthday.

Ace of Aces 02-06-04 04:38 AM

unique. very nice tho. multies flowed excellently. had a little difficulty
following it at times but in the end it wasnt too hard. but ultimately
it was great read. you seem to know wut you're doing. i enjoyed it.
keep at it.

hit mines up wen i post it. thanx

peace

Freeman 02-06-04 05:23 AM

Lol...

And in our battle you said that a didnt have any talent in Open Mic... Ok... Haha... Have you been nominated 3 times for OM of the month... Erm... No... Have a... Yes...

Please drop a picture of yourself... Id like to see the jealous ugly fucker that is Wise Ways...

On this drop...

Some decent multi's... Wordplay was ok... Some forced lines...

And if...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wise Ways
Tearing up bitches who be playing volleyball & soccer..


Was refering to me... Ive never played volleyball hoe...

This wasnt exactly a good drop... Dont go making disses on other people's OM's in battles until you have reached at least a good standard of your own hoe...

Keep it up... Haha... :thumbup:

Pz...

Wise Ways 02-06-04 07:13 PM

lmao...how could i possibly be jelouse of you?
Its something called a battle..I can tear on your weak
Open Mics if i want...slut..
And i can diss whoever i fucking want...
Got it...hoe...and quit "a" instead of "i"
And who nominated you for OM of tha month?
Did ya momma get an alias and do that shit
And i have way higher standards than you free
Thats why i've dropped like ten open mics in tha last week
And half of them were collabs...hmmm
In conclucion keep ya mouth shut

Freeman 02-06-04 09:03 PM

Wow... 'Momma' jokes... You really are mature...

My Open Mics are clearly not 'weak'...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Wise Ways
And i have way higher standards than you free
Thats why i've dropped like ten open mics in tha last week


Your standards... Do you read your own OM's? Obviously not to drop that shit...

And dropping 10 Open Mics in 7 Days is against the rules... You should know that... idiot...

Id glady tear you apart in a topical anyday... bitch...

This can be the end now... Your decision...

Pz...

Wise Ways 02-06-04 09:11 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by .:FreemaN:.

And dropping 10 Open Mics in 7 Days is against the rules... You should know that... idiot...


LMAO!!!!
I could of sworn i saw this kid hop off tha short bus...
wait....uhh yea that was him...
Can you not read..you fucking retard?
I said half of them was collabs
And if you weren't such a dumbfuck
You'd know that you can drop a collab and a single each day...
Way to know tha rules.....idiot...
And if you call what i put in there a diss..
You got another thing coming..

Freeman 02-06-04 09:17 PM

Ducking the topical then are we...

Disses mean nothing...

Not a creative bone in your body... Hoe...

Fuck you...

OUT


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