Eki vs The-Marvel-Arm
 

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no crew
no hate votes
no dickriders

hey marvel arm take ur ass back to our battle

This senior citisen needs to get a life before its 2 late
in 20 years hell be 46 still in WMC asking "how do i elevate"
wrongly labeled "Light weigh" on this site
only place you belong is in a low fat diet becaose ur "extra light"
This arm is handicaped.... making his punches land short
only way to avoid a loss here - is if there was a button "battle abort"
like your verses - your life hasnt made sence since your birth
Like the movie Armagadon- with a comet that isnt heading for earth
to give everyone a clear picture ill compare
Marvel Arm would be a methaphor - for Micheal Jackons with shaved hair (ugly)
Didnt have to look far to merk Marvel- so am joining the que
just like you sig - everyone on rb is asking - WHO D FUK ARE YOU?

Good shout dude im checking in iight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^ take 6 off your verse in our thread
you cant rap after the buzzer rings
buzzer rings battles over

Check diss, fool!

20 years and already ya rhymes are old,
Who the fuk is Eki that he should be so bould.
He's tripping on me like obsticles in his path,
I should be calling Dr Dre to clean up my aftermath.
Your played out with no weight your the one who's light,
Your breathless already an all you've had to do is write?
EKI he aint EVIL, he aint KOOL, he's INSECURE,
and unfortunately for you for wackness theres no cure.
If there was an abort button ya mumma shoud of pushed it,
It would of saved me the hastle of executing a bitch.
12 lines of your design, characteristically bare,
You wanna battle again just call my name and i'll be there!

12 lines like you.....

ok.. lets get some votes............................................. ..................................

Punches: Eki, Marvels were poorly aimed, and Eki's battle abort line was funny
Wordplay: Eki, Eki had the 'extra light' line, the only wordplay, maybe one other, Marvel didn't have any wordplay
Multis: Neither, both had straight 1 syllable rhymes, you both need to add some complexity
Personals: Eki, he had the line were he joked on Marvels sig, and how old he is.
Opener: Eki, opened with a personal, were Marvel opened with a weak punch
Closer: Eki, finished with a pretty weak personal, but it was better than 'call me out and I'll be there'.

Vote - Eki

One sided battle, Marvel you need to concentrate on the battle, you were throwing punches anywhere, and started rappin about other stuff in your verse. Bad

If there was an abort button ya mumma shoud of pushed it
Kinda flipped it on him, Marvels best line

wrongly labeled "Light weigh" on this site
only place you belong is in a low fat diet becaose ur "extra light"
Eki's best bar

Return the favor in my signature

Flow- Both flows were a little choppy but out of the two Marvel Arm probably kept it the steadiest

Punches- Eki's were way better and hit harder plus the bar before the punch was usually a setup, this didnt ocurr in Marvel Arm's and its real dope when mc's do that

Personals- Eki had a bunch of good personals real dope particularly your closer I liked that, none of Marvel's caught my eye, dont even think he had any as a matter of fact

Multies- Neither of you had any whats the deal wit that??

Vocab- Most of both your words were aite, but I thought Eki made better use of his words for sure

Originality- Once again Eki did alot better on this, he threw in some hot shit, whereas Marvel was just talkin about how cool he is and how wack Eki is as most inexperienced MC's do...and momma jokes that just didn't hit it right

Vote- Eki by far, Marvel keep workin to elevate man

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Okay here it is.

Flow=Tie, both flow's could have used some work, Eki's were kind of off which made reading it a little more work, and Marvel had some lines that didn't really work together.

Punches=Eki, his punches hit a bit harder I felt. Marvel, your punches were a little light, need a little work there.

Personals=Eki, he had some pretty good personals in his verse. Marvel, you should do a little work on developin personals, they can win you a battle.

Vocab=Tie, you both could have used some work on your vocab, good vocab can help you expand on your whole verse.

Over all=Eki, you had a pretty nice drop here, it had some good punches and some good personals, your flow was a bit messed up, and you could have used some better vocab but over all I really liked it, you had some lines that made me laugh which is good in a battle, just keep doing it maybe work on your flow a bit and you'll be there.

Marvel, you had some punches and some personals but they could have come a bit harder, your flow could have used a little work also, and maybe some work on your vocab but it wasn't bad just needs a little bit of work, just keep working at it and I think that you should be able to get there.

Vote=Eki

I forgot to ask you to vote on my battles, honest votes, if you give honest votes I'll vote honestly on your battles. Here are the links, thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

I cant officially vote (not enough posts) but, here's my thoughts:

Flow: I would say Eki had a more consistent flow.
Both did a good job, but Marvel's flow kind of
fell off towards the end.

Marvel: "If there was an abort button ya mumma shoud of pushed it,
It would of saved me the hastle of executing a bitch."

Punches: Eki had better punches in this one. Hit harder and where
more direct. Marvel's punches were alright, liked the
"breathless" line, but came off a little weak/basic.

Eki (best punch in battle): " only way to avoid a loss here - is if there was a button "battle abort"

Personals: Eki by far took it w/ the personals. A couple of good ones
dissing Marvel's age, name, and his sig. Marvel's opener
was an attempt at a personal, but was weak.

Eki: "Didnt have to look far to merk Marvel- so am joining the que
just like you sig - everyone on rb is asking - WHO D FUK
ARE YOU?"

Vocab: Id say it was a tie. Both verses were pretty basic. Elevate.

Creativity: Eki definitly used more creativity, especially in his
personals. Punches were also more creative than Marvel's.
Marvel used a few lines that seemed kinnda played,i.e.
the Dr. Dre line and the 'no cure for wackness' line.

Overall: Eki w/o a doubt, was the clear winner. His punches hit harder
and were more creative. He also had some good personals
which I felt really sealed the victory. Not bad on the part of
Marvel, but needs to be more creative/direct with his
punches and utilize personals more often.

My vote: Eki