Lyrical MC Vs Street Camp
 

10-15 lines
no crew
blind spit


checkin......

Street Champ is known for getting beaten just Like Eggs,
I got more chance seeing a pheonix than you have Mic Cred//
This Guys A Champ? Theres more possiblity me Changing the Whether...
You Tried and Can't,why the fuck is street champ claiming to sever//
Im straight off da block, wid so many different flows,
ur kickin up a lot of hostility wid each of ur week blows//
ill rip u apart wid rhymes like holly water,
dis guy aint had sex for years, so he raped his own daughter//
beef wid me,im hear to tie da score equally,
serender ur soal, coz unlike urs my rhymes are written legally//
Street camp must av figer cramp,
coz hes rhymes ave only acheveid 0-1 battle ramp//
if "street camp" was a "street camp" he'd av a all da slags,
but like hitlar,wen he sees me he'll wave those wight flags//

You've been patiently wait for me, But I'll be Leaving you soiled like Baby Oak Trees
If you come off with Sick Lines, It's because you Bite Rhymes, With Rabies 4 Free
Blow so much you Maybe A Breeze, I'ma Fuck You the 1st time like Dating A Skeez
Poetic~Justice if I Rape You On Scene
A nerd bitch, My verdict is your Name, Being I never Saw You Murder A Soul
Chew you like Skoll, Resurrect MC's I've killed, And you'd get Spit On By Ghost
Gotta grip on my toast, Comin more Loaded than the wins in the sig of your post
Nigga you're broke, Drop Your Frame better than You Probably Hold Bones
Shook off Abrasions, I'ma Scrape Skin on a spoon and Feed You Your Nerves
With Feminine Words, Shit Off Your Dome comes nice only with a New Dew or Perm
But I will drop my verse first, So you can figure what is Hot and Not in yours
Or maybe carbon copy more, Even shark material from a diary in Lil' Sis's Drawer
Bitch, Your like "Free"-With No Ass, Shit... Allen Iverson-Without The Ball
Nigga yous about to fall, You can't see me, When you Lost A Battle With Alcohol
This shit is funny, How I make you look like a dummy, Making your eyes runny
Go head a cry dunny, Fuck your Christmas, As I'm wiping my ass wit the prize money

heres how it went

lyrical mc = good flow and structure, the peice was a joy to read. nice punches and the vocab was ok.

street champ = flow was ok but structure was way off, some punches were ok but others lacked. vocab was ok tho.

breakdown

flow = lyrical mc
structure =lyrical mc
punches=lyrical mc
vocab=street champ

vote = lyrical mc

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yo, this was a pretty cool battle. Lyrical MC had a good flow and a good structure. Lyrical MC had some good punches and some vocab but it needs improvement on it.
Strret champ, you had a aiight flow but your structure was not there. You had some good punches at the start, but they faded away at the end, however your vocab was better then Lyrical MC's. PZ

Vote Lyrical MC

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my vote goes for street champ, he wasnt very good though, but i liked very much the flow in the first lines, not bad, indeed
its true that lyrical mc keep it clearer, but lacked on vocabulary.

punches were a bit weak on both
vote, street c

Lyrica MC
Street Champ is known for getting beaten just Like Eggs,
I got more chance seeing a pheonix than you have Mic Cred//
metiphore,metiphore = 5
This Guys A Champ? Theres more possiblity me Changing the Whether...
You Tried and Can't,why the fuck is street champ claiming to sever//
metiphore,personal = 5
Im straight off da block, wid so many different flows,
ur kickin up a lot of hostility wid each of ur week blows//
-self hype,-bad = 2[b]
ill rip u apart wid rhymes like holly water,
dis guy aint had sex for years, so he raped his own daughter//
[b]-wrong,punch = 2
beef wid me,im hear to tie da score equally,
serender ur soal, coz unlike urs my rhymes are written legally//
personal,-confusion = 3[b]
Street camp must av figer cramp,
coz hes rhymes ave only acheveid 0-1 battle ramp//
[b]-repeated personal,personal = 1
if "street camp" was a "street camp" he'd av a all da slags,
but like hitlar,wen he sees me he'll wave those wight flags//
-vocab,-wrong = 0

I'll be honest, You have a better score than I should have put. I was a little leniant at some points. You started off decent but as the bar's continued the commen sense and thought put into them declined. Hitler commited suicide when he was captured, there's no such thing as a slag, and you don't kick up hostility with weak blows. Understand what your writing down first. Work on you research.
Overall = 18
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Street Champ
You've been patiently wait for me, But I'll be Leaving you soiled like Baby Oak Trees
If you come off with Sick Lines, It's because you Bite Rhymes, With Rabies 4 Free
-stretched,multi,wordplay,wordplay,-played = 4
Blow so much you Maybe A Breeze, I'ma Fuck You the 1st time like Dating A Skeez
Poetic~Justice if I Rape You On Scene
-stretched,metiphore,metiphore = 3
A nerd bitch, My verdict is your Name, Being I never Saw You Murder A Soul
Chew you like Skoll, Resurrect MC's I've killed, And you'd get Spit On By Ghost
-stretched,personal,punch,punch,metiphore,-self hype = 5
Gotta grip on my toast, Comin more Loaded than the wins in the sig of your post
Nigga you're broke, Drop Your Frame better than You Probably Hold Bones
-stretched,metiphore,personal,punch,wordplay,-flo = 5
Shook off Abrasions, I'ma Scrape Skin on a spoon and Feed You Your Nerves
With Feminine Words, Shit Off Your Dome comes nice only with a New Dew or Perm
-stretched,vocab,punch,meitphore,multi = 7
But I will drop my verse first, So you can figure what is Hot and Not in yours
Or maybe carbon copy more, Even shark material from a diary in Lil' Sis's Drawer
-stretched,-wrong = 1
Bitch, Your like "Free"-With No Ass, Shit... Allen Iverson-Without The Ball
Nigga yous about to fall, You can't see me, When you Lost A Battle With Alcohol
-stretched,metiphore,multi = 2
This shit is funny, How I make you look like a dummy, Making your eyes runny
Go head a cry dunny, Fuck your Christmas, As I'm wiping my ass wit the prize money
-stretched,multi,-dumb = 3

OK you'd be alot more effective if you shortened up your lines. Try and cut them in half. You had alot of material in each line which is good, but to a point where you over did it. You also had to many multi's which annoy the hell out of people when they are in basicly every line. This was an average drop. It might have been OK wih a cut in half of the verse and more personals. Work on that.
Overall = 29
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Vote = Street Champ
It's obviouse people don't read the content if they don't like the structure

I have to say this was a gud battle

Streetchamp: You had a nice flow with sum nice rhymes, you need to work on your wordplay and voc. tho, your punches were ok but I was not feeling they came thru hard, you did have sum nice personals but nothin original, you also need to work on your multis, your structure was aight

Lyrical MC: you had a GUD flow going on with gud rhymes and a nice wordplay, you had a betta voc than streetchamp, your punches came hard and that convinced me that you should get the vote, you had sum personals but nothin to great, you did have quite sum multis and they were gud also, structure could be betta

Overall vote: Lyrical MC
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I would have to go with lyrical mc on this one,

Some of his lines made me laugh, its obvious hes more intelligent, while his structure was a bit sloppy, the flow was better than street camp, whos flow was stretched to long, the flow seriously fell off, i think you need to shorten them man, next up is punches, i think this was a matter of opinion of what punches you like, but lyrical mc made me laugh, also i saw more better worded punches, but street champ was close to him in this catergory. There wasn't much more, since wordplay/metas etc is included in punches. Good Battle.

V/Lyrical MC

Punches - Lyrical mc....needs work tho
Flow- Lyrical mc...alot easier to follow
Vocab- tie
structure - Lyrical

Over all I enjoyed Lyricals verse more but they both need work some of the punches were straight down dumb but some were good.

Vote - Lyrical