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Dazasta vs Probable
ok here the rules..
14 lines no hate votes no fake votes no biting no prewriting due 20 mins after check in no swaying, complaining, etc. thas about it..u wanna go first...yes go first... waiting for ur check in |
i am checkin in no doubt i'm here ramblin on it says my message was too short but i'm definitely checkin in
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ok good..now drop your verse...so i can proceed to rip u
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ight yoo....
i can tell this guy wants to be 'slim shady' but i leave him hurt like pain/[yea] and i'ma kill this 'Eminem' like i beat Michael Meyers at his own game/[damn]i cause dazasta disaster when i spit faster than twista rappen/[uh] is that you or your sista rappen? cuz it soundz female and thats how this 'bitch' is actin/[fuckin faggot] yo i'ma giant like andre and i'ma doctor like dre/[what!] my wordz leave you cut up like i inhaled and spit out my body spray/..axe you said you was ill and your weak ass lied/[yea ya did] now there's only one way out........suicide/..his sig this is my first battle on this site but i'm rising like tha sun/[yea] and when you lose peepz we'll sayin my spitz were surprisin when its done/[mmhhhmmm] tha truth is this bitch is like a tampon bloodier than shit/ and i just lefte him in tha ditch covered in mah shit/[i shit on rappers] ...ight my first battle would love some feedback.. |
question my guilt...i feel partially responsible..
for letting him get dreams of beating me...high-ly unprobable.. yes i guess its possible...for you to get some luck... ..your ratings unforgettable man...they unforgettably suck.. remember these nutz?..yes those words came out of my mouth... and when he asked to battle me...i made him drop a tryout*... how did you find out?...ill just follow the rules.. yet you broke them anyway..chuz my callout specifically asked for NO NEWBS... but i guess it cool....post your verse?...why begin?... ..................................chuz i could post that many dots..and still manage to win... we all need a friend....ill supply you with plenty hits.. and on a scale of 1-10...i'd have to call you....an Idiot... i get rid of herbish shit...to feel good shit inside... and if you want a chance to win...do this ..and hit quick reply... |
* in the callout thread..i made him drop a tryout to battle me
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lol.....
Daz killed this kid, didnt like it first read thru but it did infact flow nicely.. Both need to adapt to a real short structure, probable need to work on punches and flo....you lacked both, Overall Daz took shit pretty easy, as in flo personals and funny punches.....the flo was key tho...nice vote dazasta |
I cant vote officially (not enough posts), but here's my thoughts:
Flow: Dazasta killed him, with great flow. Probable's shit kinnda flowed, but was hard to read and fell off in many spots.Also what is with the [ ] at the end of the lines? Structure needs serious work. Punches: Again Dazasta wrecked shit. Strong, direct punches thru the entire verse, I LMAO at most of them. Probable's punches were played and indirect. Just far too weak compared to Dazasta's. Personals: Dazasta had good personals about Probable trying out and the call out thread. Probable tried to flip Dazasta's name " I casue Dazasta disaster", which only ended up being the most played/uncreative personal Iv'e ever seen. LOL Other than that, he had no other personals. Creatvity: Dazasta was leaps and bounds ahead of Probable in the creativity department. Had alot of funny punches/personals that hit hard, While Probable came w/ some weak and played material. Very uninspired. Overall: Clearly a merking by Dazasta. He proved to be way too much for probable to handle. Came w/ strong punches and personals that were funny and hit hard. Probable was seriously lacking in both creativity and punches/personals. He needs to consider experience when deciding to battle someone. He was simply outmatched and didn't stand a chance. Like I said before I cant officially vote, but if I could, it would be for: Dazasta My favorite line: "but i guess it cool....post your verse?...why begin?... ..................................chuz i could post that many dots..and still manage to win..." LOL! |
this battle was weak, but my vote goes to dazasta, as his had better flow and more creativity. Dazasta has harder personal whilst probable had some, but they didnt hit harder enough. both of u had punches but again dazasta had betta ones.
keep it up both of you vote dazasta plz return the favour... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860 |
Dazasta tOOK THIS MOTHER FUCKER TO A WHOLE NEW RECORD. HE KNOWS WHAT HE IS DOIN UNLIKE THE OTHER GUY HES GOT TALLENT SO D CLEARERLY KILLED TYHIS CAT
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um ok...................................^^..uppin for more votes...1
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BUT especially this.. I cant vote officially (not enough posts), but here's my thoughts: Flow: Dazasta killed him, with great flow. Probable's shit kinnda flowed, but was hard to read and fell off in many spots.Also what is with the [ ] at the end of the lines? Structure needs serious work. Punches: Again Dazasta wrecked shit. Strong, direct punches thru the entire verse, I LMAO at most of them. Probable's punches were played and indirect. Just far too weak compared to Dazasta's. Personals: Dazasta had good personals about Probable trying out and the call out thread. Probable tried to flip Dazasta's name " I casue Dazasta disaster", which only ended up being the most played/uncreative personal Iv'e ever seen. LOL Other than that, he had no other personals. Creatvity: Dazasta was leaps and bounds ahead of Probable in the creativity department. Had alot of funny punches/personals that hit hard, While Probable came w/ some weak and played material. Very uninspired. Overall: Clearly a merking by Dazasta. He proved to be way too much for probable to handle. Came w/ strong punches and personals that were funny and hit hard. Probable was seriously lacking in both creativity and punches/personals. He needs to consider experience when deciding to battle someone. He was simply outmatched and didn't stand a chance. Like I said before I cant officially vote, but if I could, it would be for: Dazasta ..Says it all[/QUOTE] Dazasta was just better, as he is..always. Because he only battles herbs. Better punches..& overall verse, thats it vote Daz |
yah this wasnt dazasta's best definately
, bu then again he dont hafta post a good one for this, dasata, like carson sed, wasnt as good when i read thru it, but when i actually lookt into it it was sick dazasta definately took this kid without dought dazasta |
both strucutures were bad, but the truth remains
kids just cant fuck wit dazasta and that suicide line is gettin old, i used it and so dide every 1 else daz got this, other cats verse was played punches from daz was nice as usual v/daz |
i can tell this guy wants to be 'slim shady' but i leave him hurt like pain/[yea]
and i'ma kill this 'Eminem' like i beat Michael Meyers at his own game/[damn] nope i cause dazasta disaster when i spit faster than twista rappen/[uh] is that you or your sista rappen? cuz it soundz female and thats how this 'bitch' is actin/[fuckin faggot] this is text, so did you hear his voice befor?...if not this was wack...even if you did this should be worded better yo i'ma giant like andre and i'ma doctor like dre/[what!] my wordz leave you cut up like i inhaled and spit out my body spray/..axe ok, nice attempt...this line had alot of potencial you said you was ill and your weak ass lied/[yea ya did] now there's only one way out........suicide/..his sig ha, decent personal... this is my first battle on this site but i'm rising like tha sun/[yea] and when you lose peepz we'll sayin my spitz were surprisin when its done/ [mmhhhmmm] nope tha truth is this bitch is like a tampon bloodier than shit/ and i just lefte him in tha ditch covered in mah shit/[i shit on rappers] nope You had some decent attempts. The suicide line was cool, but you need word on wording. Also take the "/"s and "[]"s out of your verse. It fucks it up question my guilt...i feel partially responsible.. for letting him get dreams of beating me...high-ly unprobable.. nope yes i guess its possible...for you to get some luck... ..your ratings unforgettable man...they unforgettably suck.. should have been worded better...good concept remember these nutz?..yes those words came out of my mouth... and when he asked to battle me...i made him drop a tryout*... haha, nice personal how did you find out?...ill just follow the rules.. yet you broke them anyway..chuz my callout specifically asked for NO NEWBS... lol, another nice personal but i guess it cool....post your verse?...why begin?... ..................................chuz i could post that many dots..and still manage to win... ha we all need a friend....ill supply you with plenty hits.. and on a scale of 1-10...i'd have to call you....an Idiot... lmao....best punch i seen in a minute i get rid of herbish shit...to feel good shit inside... and if you want a chance to win...do this ..and hit quick reply... blah dazasta clearly got this with better punches and personals. Seems like he just felt like picking on a newb :( lol v/D |
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