"R.I.P" unfinished
 

this is my verse, no hook yet.. this is for a collab with mister mumbles(thehandsofgod) but i know the end of the verse it got sloppy.. but drop links also

o yeah, its with my new mic...

http://verbal_conflict.dmusic.com

Not bad man

thnx...

up!

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i think u should re-do this because i said u were sloppy in it, if u really want this song to get to people u needa do it to ur full skill...

*listenin now*
beats nice, intro of it is nice, kinda brings the emotion in.
your voice is good, and the background is good
quality is good man, mic is good
lyrics are good, some lines didnt flow as good as the others
emotional song, can i do the hook? fucka the other guy :D
thats about it, its nice, you should re-do some lines

Pz

thnx.. i will redo it..

good shit man...keep it up...im lookin for ppl to possibly collab with me on songs for my album Think that will be sold on the net and possibly get distributed to stores across the nation some songs may be played on the radio too, so if your intrested hit me up on AIM at

Defkhan Five

thnx... n im sure i will hit u up.. uppin!

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....netcee...but its better then the average shit i hear...props on this...check my shit now...bitch

^^thnx.. u lucky u gave me positive feed.. with attitude like that, i would never reply...

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Nice shit men......the beat is nice for the message your passin but sometimes you flow kinda gets off track, you try to put in to much word for the amount of time you have.......but still really nice stuff men
peace