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FanTa ZeE 02-07-04 01:41 PM

I'm Your LayDee
 
Bling Bling step in the club, showered with diamond rings,
Watch the fella's freestylin getting eyed up by the pimps
Grab the mic like a bulls balls spill blood on all four walls
'Ain't any one of you homies gonna buy me a drink?'
Lyrically sick admitted to the clinic for the use of profanity
I spit on every man standing next to me,
Dance with me, and if you impress me then we can get down
Get around quicker than a two dollar hoe in the worlds smallest town
In a drop top, roof low down so chicks can be spying my crown,
But if they trying to steal it then they treading on uneven ground
Knocked out in the first round, like they addicted to loss
They come back for a ear bashing when they know that FanTa's the boss
Crack open a can, dehydrated? then let me quench your thirst
When i appear at your funeral, i'ma crash into your hurse
Don't know whats worse, you saying you rhyme better or you tryin to prove?
That you ripped the mic better, your dignity's gone, whats left to lose

Archival 02-07-04 02:12 PM

It was ok, i guess. I really think your last drop was way, way iller than this. I guess I just wasn't feeling the topic as much as your last one. Didn't have the emotion of the one before either. The flow was still good, and it was an easy read. It was ok. I just know you can come alot better though. Keep droppin though. I'll be watching for you.

Please drop feedback here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112603

FanTa ZeE 02-08-04 10:39 AM

big brother is watching you..

thanks, i appriciate that loads, thanks for the reply...

Penskills 02-08-04 10:49 AM

Hmm~~~not one of your best works...but still better than half of the stuff on this page..you can be my lady anytime..^.^ and Thanks for the support!!!~~~

FanTa ZeE 02-08-04 11:03 AM

you don't have to thank me for support, i will always suppot you, because you fully deserve it...


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