Mindtrap Vs Lizzard.
 

Syea!!!!!!! 10 lines, no herb votes, wait its fl.. only fair votes than.. o.O .. spit when ready .. plz today ..

I'll key soon

End this shit right quick, make sure BL cries
So watch me split this bitch
...down the middle and take sides
You're wack duke, and whats hurts the most
Is that the Flu could beat ya sickly ass
....with a freepost (Flu is C-Section you dumb fucks)
So I'll blaze kid leave him fired up for this match
And only when talkin of tossing salad
...is this faggot fuck ever a great catch
I'm nice...
belivee that... So I let cat post a verse before mine
So I could pull an RTM and leave the wackness behind
Leave Big L fucked like reality, in a dumpster a total wreck
And yeah I'm a step behind... your ears
...while destroying this faggots neck

yeaaaaaa this is sum hot shit!.,..........lets upppppppppper..........
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ayo, i think both had an even flow, punches belong ta mindtrap, multies are both, creativity, i thought both had even creativity, but

vote - black lizzard

the last lines i thought sealed it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112669

heres the link ta my battle

How about this.
Someone that can actually poll and explain a vote come in here and get things started.

Thank you = )

I guess this is an up

Eh...
Needs work...
12/20




Eh..
A little better
...needs work tho
14/20


Both verses were rather weak
and could use some elevation
Punches made it look like a cat fight
Simply wasn't a great battle....
But lizzard somewhat edged mindtrap on this
His vocabulary was just a lil better
and punches tapped a lil harder...
therefore....

V/Black Lizzard

Black Lizzard- Ok Verse, You Had Some Punches That HIt And Some That Missed, Your Flow Was OK, And Structure Can be Way Better, Work On Personals...

Mindtrap- Ok Verse, You Had Weak Punches Though, And Flow Was Nice, And Structure, Ok Personals, Are You An Alias That Underestimated The Newbie, If So, Tisk Tisk Lol

Punches- BL
Flow- Tie
Structure- MT
Creativity- BL
Vote-BL

Hit This Up Everyone
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111911

mind trip takes dis just...both tied on every thing....but mind trips punches hit a bit harder....
v/mind trip(close tho)
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

This battle was a bit weak...

"You're wack duke, and whats hurts the most
Is that the Flu could beat ya sickly ass"

^Mindtrap..that line was corny as it gets..your structure seemed okay,but your flow was choppy,and your punches really didn't hit hard..


"Ill leave him,behind so he can straighten the learning curve"

^a little better but,not much better...Lizard your flow seemed okay and you had a better structure and your punches hit a bit harded(although it was weak,your oppents were much weaker)..

Once again this was a weak ass battle..but my Vote-Black Lizzard for better punches..

^^^
If you dont understand how the punches work with a structure do not vote.
Period.
And if anyone ever brings up vocab as if it is important in a battle should be shot.
I'm done here.

Punches: Tie, both had their share of weak and decent punches.
Wordplay: Mind, definitely had better wordplay, split the middle and takes sides, I thought that was dope.
Multis: Neither, both had 1 syllable basic rhymes, flip some multis next time
Personals: Neither, MT brang up a line about C-Section, but I don't know what that's about, so I'm not considering it.
Opener: Mind, had a dope wordplay.
Closer: Black, Mind's closer was really weak, Black had a very poorly aimed punch, but still better.

vote - Mindtrap

Ill leave him,behind so he can straighten the learning curve
Decent wordplay, Black's best line

So watch me split this bitch
...down the middle and take sides
Dope... by Mind

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