reality
 

had enough of the industry trying to rip this shit outta me,
thinkin they can televize my feelins all over the t.v,
one of these days im gunna turn round and retaliate,
and hit them where it hurts before its too late,
take them to the land down under,
kick the shit out of them before im finkin of the blunder,
i can hear the police after me now, finkin they hard chasin me outta the town,
ill hibeanate in the rappin' capital named detroit,
earn a living by proving my point,
show the fingers to the law,
i know wat ppl will be finkin bout my shit, J'adore,
but wen it gets to much, where will i turn,
you woulda thought by this time i woulda learnt,
i will have to rely on my lifes ability,
else i will come down smackdown to reality,
this is wot can happen to you if you dont fight back,
you need the energy else you will get a wack,
from reality waking u up, u will soon be on the streets begging from a cup


go easy on critic because im new

dis was ok for a newb but faded in da middle....strong start but jst faded in da middle.keep it up.try 2 keep da lines da same lenght....
pz out bro!!

it wasnt bad suppose